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for Nameless Desires

by Jelp

person ringpop
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"...drink, get so plastered that night that you came back, tied me up, and-" AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SWEET!!! We will finally know what happen! yeah! ;P Can't wait.
=)
person blueh
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I can't wait for the next part! I've been waiting for it for so long! Happy happy! Keep updating!
person Anon
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely adore this story! I cant wait for the next chapter, finally! yay! please update soon!
person Rosebud
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter and I can't wait to find out what happens next! Keep up the great work! ^^
person hisoka
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha he punched an officer something we would all like to do,t would get them off their lazy asses and get them to do something other than giving j-walkers tickets.who doesnt wanna take down their enemy thai way,but not always with them getting eaten by a fox.everythg like!!
person Allys
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god I'm so excited. Next chapter is the big answer!! O.O, Yay! XD!! LOL, okay. This chapter was really good, sort of scary, kinda cute. Kyuubi was really one sick dude. Sociopaths really freaking scare me. LOL, umm... I'm such a wuss. Anyway it was cute when Naruto and Sasuke were talking to each other in the hospital and even for a little bit there in real time when Sasuke was teasing, but :(. Oh and I think Naruto did an excellent job of taking care of himself. He got away, he lived and that the really important thing. That was what all the training was for. *Huggles him* And I loved that Sasuke clocked Asuma XD, it was hilarious. So was Sakura going all squealing yaoi fangirl XD. You scared the shit out of me for a second, though with the police men I thought one of them had died!! LOL, this is all over the place XD, I'm too excited to think straight. I really want to know what the freak happened. Thanks so Much for the update, LOL. This is a really cool story. Is it wrapping up soon?? 1 or 2 more chapters?? Or will there be more?? LOL, I don't really want it to end XD. But hey, all good things right XD. Thanks again ♥
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you are like a genie ask and you shall recieve. when i asked you to update nameless desires and restless i didn't actually think you would do it so soon (yeah). i really like how you made kuubyi seem as if he had no feelings. what are you going to have done to the fox is he going to be put to sleep, experimented on, oe my favorite live with naruto. you really did a good job describing how a psychopath thought and acted (kudos to you). i can't wait to see the next chapter because it has got to be a hoot. i mean how do you go from plastered to tying someone up. since you are granting wishes by the waiti know my favorite restless has to be getting updated next. thanks
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Tsunade-sama! You can't just hit him!" a voice scolded. "The hell I can't! I just did!"

this is, like the best line ever. it was hilarious. this chapter was really good, though i can't stand that it ended there. i really hope you update again very soon. i also hope those two get a happy ending from you. i'm so horribly empathetic when it comes to good, well-written stories, and i've been reading some pretty depressing shit lately. give something to feel happy about please! i think i'm starting to get down from an angst overload or something.

person beautifullove348
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SUCH A CLIFFIE! I'm practically dying. Finally, the smut chapter! I can't wait :P Please update soon :) I love this story!