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May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, and I truly hope that you will update it. I don't know if I have sent you a review before, but I'm sending you one now. Love this, and I've reread it a few times, and I always hope that you will have updated this when I log on, so yeah,... What I'm trying to say is that I hope you will update this sometime in the future so I can read a new chapter :)
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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a fun read! I enjoyed every chapter of it. I think your version of Naruto's hot and sexy....poor guy....he doesn't know what's coming for him. Can't wait to read more from you. :)
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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WHERE'S THE REST OF IT?!?!?!?!?!?!?! OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!! MORE, I NEED MORE!!!! seriously though haha it stopped just at the good part! You totally have to get the next chapter out!! No pressure or anything hehe =P seriously, LOVING this story!!! =D
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello there, my dear. I just want to let you know that your fics are great and I'm sorry to hear that they weren't receiving the attention the attention that they greatly deserve. Those of us that have read your stories are eagerly awaiting your next update(s). I, personally, have a book that I use to keep track of my favorite fics on this site. 4 of your fics are already in there and even though 2 of them haven't been touch in over 3 months I refuse to take them out because the story was that good.
Most of these stories I read from my phone during a lunch break and either work or school so I don't always have a chance to sit and give you a well thought out review. I could always send one that says "nice job. please update soon" but I don't think that would be as appreciated as a review that asks questions, guesses as to what's gonna happen next and really lets you know that the reader is into your fic.
Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that there is somebody out there enjoying your work and would love for you to continue them. I will be posting this on every fic that I have read by you and hope that it will inspire you, if only a little bit, to feed your poor yaoi fangirls a little more. Hopefully, some of your other readers will see this review and do the same. Looking forward to your next updates, whenever that may be.
~Devious
p.s. my god, this fic is funny as hell. i cant believe you didn't get a lot of responses for this one. the fact that the first chapter had Naru singing and dancing in his undies should have sold this one like hotcakes from mcdonalds. just wanted to get that out there.
Most of these stories I read from my phone during a lunch break and either work or school so I don't always have a chance to sit and give you a well thought out review. I could always send one that says "nice job. please update soon" but I don't think that would be as appreciated as a review that asks questions, guesses as to what's gonna happen next and really lets you know that the reader is into your fic.
Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that there is somebody out there enjoying your work and would love for you to continue them. I will be posting this on every fic that I have read by you and hope that it will inspire you, if only a little bit, to feed your poor yaoi fangirls a little more. Hopefully, some of your other readers will see this review and do the same. Looking forward to your next updates, whenever that may be.
~Devious
p.s. my god, this fic is funny as hell. i cant believe you didn't get a lot of responses for this one. the fact that the first chapter had Naru singing and dancing in his undies should have sold this one like hotcakes from mcdonalds. just wanted to get that out there.
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is really a great story, looking forward to your updates..
please notify me when there is a new chapter..,
jake_jake_08@yahoo.com.ph
please notify me when there is a new chapter..,
jake_jake_08@yahoo.com.ph
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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
and again, i find this fic after a long time! hehe it's even better than i remember and Shikamaru, for finding everything "troublesome", sure is up to stuff. but fiiiiinnnnaaaallly Naruto and Sasuke meet! and I'm glad I, or my review rather, inspired you! i hope i don't lose track of your story again so i can read the next update! ^_^
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December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit, I was skeptical when I first started reading this story. However, you have surpassed all of my expectations. This is a very well written and compelling story, with an interesting plot to boot. Thank you for posting this very enjoyable story.
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November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaaah it's so freaking good and it's funny too update soon will yaXD
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November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a way to have them meet! I love It! I thought that Sasuke was going to miss his chance to meet Naruto. Btw, do you have an emailing list? Can you add me? email is marqqui @ yahoo . com
I hope you do that way I can know right away after you update! Thanks again and hope to hear from you very soon!
I hope you do that way I can know right away after you update! Thanks again and hope to hear from you very soon!
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi! wow so happy for the dedication... anyway i am even happier that you updated at last... sorry for the late review as i just saw ur update just now when i did my monthly check up on your fics... see this is the reason why i was hoping to find your fics in fanfiction.net...though totally agree with you on the part where people do not review...
awww gaara is so sweet... i find it sweet when he is confuse... this shows that he is human and also encounter emotional problems... but still hoping that he would be a competition to sasuke's plight for naruto's heart... i really want sasuke to be jealous coz it seems right now he just want to get into naruto's pants and dump him later on... want him to be truly besotted or in love with naruto... hmm when itachi came into the picture, it also gave me something to look forward to... i forgot to mention that i also love the uchiha brother's rivalry... especially love it when they fight for naruto's attention... (i'm hinting for this one sided pairing) ahem.... anyway gaara seems to be indecisive that i am now thinking that he would not be the one who could challenge sasuke heavily... plus he already has neji in his life... and it seems strong.. it was mentioned that he is happy with neji... so hopefully there would be someone who could do better than him.. im rooting for sai and itachi now... so till next chapter then... tc!
awww gaara is so sweet... i find it sweet when he is confuse... this shows that he is human and also encounter emotional problems... but still hoping that he would be a competition to sasuke's plight for naruto's heart... i really want sasuke to be jealous coz it seems right now he just want to get into naruto's pants and dump him later on... want him to be truly besotted or in love with naruto... hmm when itachi came into the picture, it also gave me something to look forward to... i forgot to mention that i also love the uchiha brother's rivalry... especially love it when they fight for naruto's attention... (i'm hinting for this one sided pairing) ahem.... anyway gaara seems to be indecisive that i am now thinking that he would not be the one who could challenge sasuke heavily... plus he already has neji in his life... and it seems strong.. it was mentioned that he is happy with neji... so hopefully there would be someone who could do better than him.. im rooting for sai and itachi now... so till next chapter then... tc!