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September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey there~
Seeing as you wanted 15 more review by tomorrow, I guess I can pitch in.
I really liked how this all started, its a hilarious idea and I love envisioning Naruto singing, but for some reason I find myself scrolling past the walls of lyrics and words when you write him singing.
Maybe its just me, but I think its dragging a bit now, I hope something a bit more interesting comes soon~
Though, I have to say, I do love how you characterized Naruto, ESPECIALLY when he was jogging/working out in the eariler chapters
That was hot~
I love when people write him as hot and not dumbwitted and stupid (I like him more on the sly and trickster side xD)
Soo, yup, that's all I have to say for now~
=]
I hope you update soon, I can't wait to read how Sasuke will manage to woo Naruto
(I'm sure it'll be good, and probably humorous, I hope)
Seeing as you wanted 15 more review by tomorrow, I guess I can pitch in.
I really liked how this all started, its a hilarious idea and I love envisioning Naruto singing, but for some reason I find myself scrolling past the walls of lyrics and words when you write him singing.
Maybe its just me, but I think its dragging a bit now, I hope something a bit more interesting comes soon~
Though, I have to say, I do love how you characterized Naruto, ESPECIALLY when he was jogging/working out in the eariler chapters
That was hot~
I love when people write him as hot and not dumbwitted and stupid (I like him more on the sly and trickster side xD)
Soo, yup, that's all I have to say for now~
=]
I hope you update soon, I can't wait to read how Sasuke will manage to woo Naruto
(I'm sure it'll be good, and probably humorous, I hope)
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD man i love ur youtube stories XD cant wait for the next chapter. lol im always on youtube and that would be soo coool seeing someone do the same songs....um never mind ^^; but i could so see it all in my head XD hope to see the next chapter... oh and just asking but is naruto going to be singing with you by chris brown??? if he isnt is there a chance he could sing it???
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! I cannot get hot singing Naruto out of my head! You, my friend are a fucking genies!!!!!!!!! You are doing such a great job. I just hope to encounter some smuck some x3. Keep it up! Can't wait till Sasu and Naru meet!
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey there I loved this and have waited so long to see more!!! Update tus and I promise I will buy you cookies everyday!!!!!!!!
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is butters sister(We did different comments)
I just wanted to say I loved reading this with my older sister you're such a good writer. I can't wait to get some Sasnaru soon... Hmmm... Is it wrong to hate Gaara in this story? *wonders* Oh well he's needs to just move the fuck on already! Stupid unfaithful bastard... XD Update soon? *puppy dog eyes*
I just wanted to say I loved reading this with my older sister you're such a good writer. I can't wait to get some Sasnaru soon... Hmmm... Is it wrong to hate Gaara in this story? *wonders* Oh well he's needs to just move the fuck on already! Stupid unfaithful bastard... XD Update soon? *puppy dog eyes*
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey I like this story more?
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yo bro awesome story so far
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AhA!
when i saw that this was updated i actually squeed outloud, much to my relief no one was around to question me :D
AND then i see my name in the authors notes and im like OMG.OMG.OMG.OMG!!!!!.
yey! like thanks and now on to my actual review >_<
wow. its amazing.
i laughed at the dobermens, but if you want a really leathal dog forget dobermans go for the chiwawa's. (sp) they are leathal, my cousin has one and by george does it hurt when it nips ya.
i liked how the story progressed smoothly through this chapter and it gave quite a lot more of the story. i really like the whole naruto teasing sasuke it was fun to read. their thoughts especially. the you tube comments in your story cracked me up, mostly because i drew parrelels with the site and know how heated the disscusions get on it its insane.
poor gaara, i dont want him to steal naruto from sasuke, but i want him to be happy.
you better fix it miss ^_^
lol temari in the mens, cracked me up, i love her in the manga, anime and in fic especially, she is always funny and sarcastic and the epitome of girl power in the non girly way.
when shika came out of the mens whilst i know hes probally there to see sasuke or itachi or something as hes plotting, i had an inner perv moment and was lik LOL at myself. (if i have to have a het naruto pairing is temari and shikamaru)
pleae update soon, like really soon. :D i really hope you continue it and pray you dont get writers block as this story is fantastic.
and i wouldnt know what to do otherwise.
one of you greatful fan girl readers.
chibi_jubjub
when i saw that this was updated i actually squeed outloud, much to my relief no one was around to question me :D
AND then i see my name in the authors notes and im like OMG.OMG.OMG.OMG!!!!!.
yey! like thanks and now on to my actual review >_<
wow. its amazing.
i laughed at the dobermens, but if you want a really leathal dog forget dobermans go for the chiwawa's. (sp) they are leathal, my cousin has one and by george does it hurt when it nips ya.
i liked how the story progressed smoothly through this chapter and it gave quite a lot more of the story. i really like the whole naruto teasing sasuke it was fun to read. their thoughts especially. the you tube comments in your story cracked me up, mostly because i drew parrelels with the site and know how heated the disscusions get on it its insane.
poor gaara, i dont want him to steal naruto from sasuke, but i want him to be happy.
you better fix it miss ^_^
lol temari in the mens, cracked me up, i love her in the manga, anime and in fic especially, she is always funny and sarcastic and the epitome of girl power in the non girly way.
when shika came out of the mens whilst i know hes probally there to see sasuke or itachi or something as hes plotting, i had an inner perv moment and was lik LOL at myself. (if i have to have a het naruto pairing is temari and shikamaru)
pleae update soon, like really soon. :D i really hope you continue it and pray you dont get writers block as this story is fantastic.
and i wouldnt know what to do otherwise.
one of you greatful fan girl readers.
chibi_jubjub
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gyahh! I'm becoming as paranoid as Naruto ^^; Everytime he sings I can see a way for it to end up on youtube ^^;
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Stupid Neji, forcing Gaara to do something he doesn't want to. I hope they end up happy together because I absolutely adore that couple. The conversation between Sasuke and Naruto was just getting to the good part! Why must it have ended?
I love this story, everything about it. It is not only original but very interesting.
Please please update soon :)