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for I Must Paint You

by malinasmurder

person MrsCake
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A crack pairing if I ever saw one and I absolutely love it. You made it work! Bravo!
person Tenithus
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderfully hot and funny.

'Of course! I had to send a copy of the finished painting to Temari.' Ha ha, you gotta love Sai.
person prinlita
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this fic was very funny, and also very very hot. You should do more with this couple because they are so much fun. This is a great fic, and I'd like to see more. Way to go!!!
person eva24
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'll be brutally honest here. It was hot, but I found it way funnier XD . You really captured the cluelessness that is Sai and Temari is as straightforward as she's supposed to be. And as an added bonus, you demonstrated a positively wicked sense of humour. I wonder how Temari explained the portrait to Gaara...
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so funny! It was seriously hot, but I loved the line ;

He seemed to be going blind, how curious...

You really kept them IC, it was awesome.
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
BTW even tho I loved it and I hope you write more (especially Sai, I love him :3 ) this would be ruined if it was more than a oneshot. Just some friendly advice.