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aw maaann i REALLY wish you had continued this. Very well written

please tell me you aren't just leaving this fic here???!! I've been keeping and eye out, hoping for an update..^^

haha hes a pervert, dont stop now its just starting hope you continue soon i wanna see how he gets him how it all turns out.
updates?

omfg that was precious. I feel so... omg I don't know... I should be sorry for Naruto's predicament but I can't stop laughing so I'm basically screwed wherever you look so whatever. Great chapter... can't wait for more

Wow, this story is really interesting!
Please say that your're going to write more!^^

it's okau....but they'd get arrested if they did that in an airport...honestly it doesn't matter if they're gay or not. I hate that my country doesn't support gay people, it's irritating and i'd change that if i could, but the sole reason people aren't open about their sexuality is because of this. so i'd advice you not to do that in india, but it's fiction...what the hell. there are only a few bollywood celebrities who've said something about it and they don't exactly get treated quite right. and sad to say almost all my male friends think gay people are sick....i hate that!! but still...anyway

ok my e-mail is makkura_arashi @ hotmail. com i don't have your e-mail so u should mail me. and well it depends on which part of india you're going to focus on...and yes naru wearing a sari for a play is okay...bhangra in delhi sounds a tad weird cos it's so punjabi...maybe you should let them take a tour? if you want tips on maharashtra and south india i'd be glad to give them to you. plus if u visit again you should visit the south...our cultures differ completely almost in the south and north apart from language and stuff....so yeah e-mail me...

This is really good. You should write more!

Love the plot and how you wrote Naruto and Sasuke. I hope you write more! :)

hey, i'm indian and i live in south india. there are one or two things i'd like to point...this is not a flame, just telling you. in Delhi, if you're talking about an airport then u can be sure all most everyone understand english. except for the peons and other staff maybe. and don't write why u don't like you're chapter...it's a good start. homosexuals aren't liked in india so you'll have to keep their relationship a bit low key. and anyway e-mail me if you feel like it, i'd like to get your perspective on my country, it'll be fun. ja ne...and the story seems quite good!!
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