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If only Naruto would listen to those around him (ah but then we wouldn't have your wonderful story). Thanks for the update.

I forgot to say that I hope that Naruto ends up back with Gaara. Thanks again for the new chapter.

Ya know, I like SasuNaru, NaruSasu pairings quite well normally because it's so easy to make Sasuke either seek redemption for his betrayal against Naruto or to still keep that side of him that is jealous and filled with rage. I can't say it surprises me to see him still trying to destroy Naruto because he's more powerful...that just seems to be his MO. I also like that Naruto isn't as oblivious to Sasuke's true nature as everyone seems to think he is. It's great that all the other are ready and willing to be at Naruto's back, because he will need his friends when Sasuke decides he doesn't want him anymore, but it's also nice to know that Naruto is somewhat prepared for it. He might be a bit naive and dense still but he's not stupid. It's rather obvious that Sasuke won't let them have sex in any other position because he simply doesn't want to see Naruto's face. He can do his deed and enjoy himself without really taking into consideration who it is he's doing it with. Besides all that, I think the further they get in their "relationship" the more Naruto will miss the tenderness he had with Gaara. Are you planning to end this as GaaraNaruto?

I really like this fic. I, like many are fond of Sasuke, but I am not blind to his faults and neither are you. Sasuke has some real issues and sometimes I wonder if those issue won't destroy Naruto someday in trying to be there for Sasuke even though Sasuke doesn't deserve it. I can't wait for the next chapter. I don't know where you are going with the whole Sasuke/Naruto relationship but I'm willing to take a backseat and enjoy whatever you come up with whether they end up in a better relationship or a torn friendship.

I LOVED Sai in this. LMAO, it was amazingly in character. I can totally envison him doing that in canon. HA! Anyway, I'm sor of rooting for Naruto/Gaara now. Sasuke is being an aws (again, IN character, kudos) and Gaara's just so underdstanding.I love Gaara in general though, so I'm not entirely impartial. Anyway, this story is FANTASTIC so far. I will definitely have to keep an eye out so that I don't miss your next update. There is a VERY good chance that I might become obsessed. Thanks for posting!

Everthing you had Sai say, think and do was just so funny. I laughed thru almost the whole chapter.

I absolutely love this story! Most of the time when I read stories that jump povs like this it gets kind of irritating, but I have to say that you have done a very good job in making separate but cohesive sections…I hope that makes sense :P. I am also really interested in reading Sasukes pov.

GOD i hope naruto ends up with Gaara again. Anyhoo Im loving this. Keep up the good work and update soon.

I hope despite Sasuke useing Naruto now that it ends being an amicable realtionship. I hate angst. But I'm reading and enjoying this piece. :D

At first I was thinking I'm reading some new story over again... and when I was reading the author note at the top my heart actually skipped a beat. I was like why is my name up there... then I was like oh man I pissed the author up because of my comment and now she's going to chew me up...

But I guess my suggestion helped... I mean I really didn't mean any offense by saying what I did. It's just that although as inticing as the story is, each chapter needs to have a proper beginning, middle and end. I mean like there is nothing worse to go to a movie, love the beginning and middle and then suddenly grump over how bad the ending is. But you definetly piqued my curiosity to see how Sasuke will betray the dobe.

*sigh* he's a definite user and abuser. That's why I'm not quite content to write Sasu/Naru stories... I keep remembering the Valley of the End.

Oh and word of advice. Don't have like a major cliffie. I did that to one of my stories recently and most of my reviewers... all they can do is bitch about how I suddenly cut off what Sasuke is going to say. Tch... it got their attention sure enough but not quite in the way I wanted to.

Well happy typing anyway XP