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for Losing Battles

by tasukigirl

person Anon
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is sooo emotional.

Thanks.

schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wonder...will Gaara be there to pick Naruto back up when Sasuke breaks him? I hope so. I really do. Naruto deserves so much better than Sasuke...he needs Gaara.
person emp78
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Poor Naruto. Update soon.
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, very intesting. Very well-written. Look forward to the next chapter. I love how you protrayed Gaara. Until next time, take care, and god bless.
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How sad...it's crazy really when you think about it. Man that so much on a drunken Sakura's shoulders...but does Naruto know he's being used...or he knows and is just pretending to not know...man...this is like deep stuff...keep going okay! i really like it!
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Gaara!!! I feel so bad for him!! Great first chapter! :)
person Rosebud
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was good!

More PLEASE! XD
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ne, ne it's too short... it's missing that something that willingly hooks a reader into wanting to see what happens next. I mean a lovely start... but I'm not quite anticipating the second chapter as I should be =/