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for Accomplish The Opposite

by Amarukoira

person phoenixfirekitsune
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NO! No and no and no and no and no! Do NOT make Haku into some kind of complete whore! I don't hate him! I still love Haku! How can you not love Haku? He can't help it if he's the pretty boy who has the whole damsel in distress complex. You gotta love him if only for the pretty boy part. Besides, he still has Zabuza. Gah! Orichimara raped Gaara too! Stupid freaky snake guy...*mumbles quietly for a while* He deserved to die. And he killed Kiba and Shino too! NOOOO! *huffs* Well, at least Deidara and Sasori actually were in this chapter, even if Sasori was only seen as the unnamed other redhead. Update soon please!
person Sekre
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay okay, maybe I won't be soo mad at Haku ... I'll just be mad at Itachi for now, until we get things cleared up. I guess I could see why Itachi kissed him back so tenderly, 'cause he's a friend and Itachi is seriously lackin in those.

Now what happened with Oori that got him killed I wonder. Guess we'll find out. :)
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay! you updated. you have no idea how happy I am. anyway, great chapter. when Itachi saw the man at college I briefly thought of the movie A Beautiful Mind, and wondered if Itachi had a case of paranoia schizophrenia.

poor Sasuke! Why do you torture him? or...why does he torture himself? he should just up and leave Itachi!!!

I'M KIDDING!!11!
person Carola
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AGain I give you love!
Even though you didn't let them, I LOVED the Uchihacest action bit!! <333
And your Haku keeps melting me! ^___^
Great job on this chapter too, can't wait for the next one!
person phoenixfirekitsune
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow. That was such an intense chapter. I feel really bad for Sasuke. The poor boy just can't get a break from his older brother. I love how you can just feel the tension in the air through the writing. I do feel bad for Haku for the whole Orochimaru attempted rape thing, but why is he getting so attached to Itachi if Zabuza is his husband to be? Makes me feel sad for Zabuza too.
person MyOwnTigerEyes
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Itachi....grrrr...you ass!

Will you have Sasuke act differently now? Will he go to Orochimaru? What will happen now with him and Itachi? Will they be together both as brothers and lovers?
person emp78
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Who are those guys and why are they after Itachi? I feel bad for Haku. Orochimaru, EWWW!!! Nightmares, anyone?
Can't wait to see what happens next.
person Sekre
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, why did he do that?? I hate Haku now >.> Sorry, just he knew Itachi and Sasuke had something .. seemed rather a whore-ish thing to do. I hope Itachi will figure out if it really had to do with Sasuke or if he really does like Haku .. in which case, Sasuke should just move on.
person Sekre
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They have quite an intriguing relationship .. though their past seems rather vague, for good reason I'm sure. Can't wait to find out more.
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I was so happy when you updated. Don't worry, your chapter 2 didn't suck. Actually, it was better than chapter 1 because there was Uchihacest action. Anyway, I hope you continue this soon. I like the characterizations. Haku is a little ball of sunshine, in my opinion. I like him.

ooh, I'm so excited for all the things you have planned for Sasuke and Itachi. But they will end up together in the end, right? if you don't, I'll probably, more than likely, for sure, very certainly, throw myself off a cliff.

okay, that was a little extreme.

no pressure. pls continue sooooon!