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will neji get his revenge? i hope so.. hehehe

It wasn't bad, but I really can't see Sakura putting Neji through that unless it was at least partially consensual. Sakura's not the kind of person to rape anyone, especially if she respects them, but since I don't know the full terms of the challenge, I can't say too much about that. Aside from that, I found that I wasn't being as drawn into the story as I could have been. I think you have a lot of potential for writing fics, it's just that the way you present things to the reader makes it seem a bit bland. Sorry I can't give better help, as I really wish I could, but I hope the person you wrote it for enjoyed it. :3