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January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love this story!!!!
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March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
cant wait for you to ad again its been a while
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October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please add soon this is my favorite naruto story ever!!!! i cant wait for more!!!!!!
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, I love your story, the pairing is unusal and yet the way you write it is absolutely breathtaking. I can only hope that the next chapter comes out soon, for these last chapters left me so excited at the way your story was, ...marvellous. I love it. If life were a manga, than reading your story and supplying the brain with the accompaning imaged would have left me dead long ago , from blood loss, since I couldn`t have stopped the nosebleed. please update soon, I implore you, a new favourite of mine (of several others, mind you)
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
too fuckng funny. good plot great character development.please post again soon!
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May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this story but the ending seemed a little rushed or is it not the ending? Hope not.
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Very gooood! You made a fairly decent sex-scene in ch. 9.
I spoke too soon.
Elliot
I spoke too soon.
Elliot
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ARGH! You've left your readers so sexually frustrated with chapter 8. It's like, the whole story is building up to that one moment where the two finally break and show each other how much they love one another... AND YOU SKIP IT ENTIRELY!! You seems a little sex-shy, dearie; every time you get get going on a steamy roll, you abruptly stop. It seems you cannot explain in detail anything that happens lower than the face. Words like "breast" and "manhood" are your friend in this kind of writing.
For this reason alone, you get a 1.
Otherwise, great work. You really had us Adult Fans going for a moment there, with the suggestion of a lemon.
-Elliot
P.S.
Is Ino hemophilic? She sure bleeds a lot...
For this reason alone, you get a 1.
Otherwise, great work. You really had us Adult Fans going for a moment there, with the suggestion of a lemon.
-Elliot
P.S.
Is Ino hemophilic? She sure bleeds a lot...
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved how everyone in the chapter was tortured in one way or the other. Ino's pole dance was wonderfully descriptive and Kankuro's reactions were great! Good Job!
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June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So, I've been working my way through your story (which I'm enjoying immensely, btw), and I just finished chapter 6. I was wondering if you had a link to the picture that inspired you for the chapter? The one of Kankuro in the robe? I'd like to see it, if you know of a copy lounging about the interweb somewhere.
Anyway, I now continue with the story...
Anyway, I now continue with the story...