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Wow, that was a great ending to a great story. Thank you for sharing it with us. although I would have liked to know if the four original team mates rebuilt their friendship, you are right they didnt really fit in the end of the story. Great work.

You ARE a god damn good author. A bit disappointed how there wasn't a lot of Naruto or Sasuke, but thats understandable. This story of yours was very satisfying. :) I deeply enjoyed reading this, and hope your motivation to write more ficlets will come up... eventually. xD

I must say I really liked your OCs, they fit the Naruto world very nicely. All in all I had a brilliant time reading your story, your writing style is certainly not hard to read. Very well constructed and rounded out.

I just realized I probably don't review this enough. I wanted to make up for it by giving you an lots of biased, completely non-informational praise. I absolutely love this story, I love the characters (especially Aki and Kano)
and I really love the romance. It's realistic without being depressingly boring and, though I like to tell myself I want it to move faster, the speed is perfect. I like Sakura, which is odd because I'm usually annoyed at her in every story, and Kakashi's love for her it touching without being too ooc. This one is a gem, thank you for letting us all read it!

i fuckin cried.. i love your fic. i love your fic. i love your writing style. you portrayed so much emotion i couldnt help but cry and feel the betrayal Sakura felt.

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me again ^_^

you have no idea how touching and heart wrenching and warming this fic was to me. i read it in one go and it is now 3 am :P. i love you! haha and your style of writing ah! it is just so emotional i cried about 3 times. i cant wait to read more of your other writings.

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heh and this is my first review in aff. ;]

oh and i loved your OC's soo much. Aki and Kano where just adorable. i usually hate OC's but it was hard not to love them.

I'm so glad you completed this one! I just wanted to say 'Thank You' for your great work!! I had a lot of fun reading and suffering through it. I can only hope you'll keep writing. Would be shame to miss you!!

Excellent fic. Has to be one of my favorites. And the end reminded me a bit of the movie "The Guardian." Which I love. Congrats on writing one of the most freaking fantastic fics I've ever read!

This was a great story. The character development was nice and the internal angst mad this a read that was more than just a great story but a lesson in facing what you find most difficult and becoming stronger because of it.