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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Totally still with ya! Love the background on why Sakura is a hard ass. I think I would be too after witnessing that. Keep up the good work and keep the updates coming.
Rox
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice very nice I love the way you describe sakura's emotion in the last chapater i thik that you did a good job with that chapater I cannot wait for more.
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say i got teary eyed from that chapter but i did not let them fall!! It was needed to show how strong Sakura really is though the way her teamates died was...wow. Your a beautiful writer please keep up the good work.
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm unsure how this relates to the rest of the story. But it is very well written, very dark.
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
realy really good. I love the relationship they have and I love the line you put in about the one constant and one changing. very beautiful, can't wait for more.
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm very happy you chose that version of the chapter to post. It was very touching how everyone cares about Sakura and how Kakashi is now coming to grips with it.
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June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm starting to enjoy this story more and more. You are doing a great job of setting it up, and leading it beautifully. Thanks for writing it! =)
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June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved it. I loved the ending lines. I can't wait to see what happens next. Will Naruto and Sasuke return?
Rox
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June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH! What a suprise to see this today, and it was awesome as usual. I thought you did the convos very well and to me achieved the emotions you were going for. [as always] I look forward to the next installment. Now we're finally getting somewhere, lol. *steeples fingers*
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June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this. It is raw and emotional and very well written. Update soon!