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by hasu86

person padoopadoop
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. It is a believable outcome, given the backstory. It is nice to read a story about Sakura where she is not "Queen-B-in-your-face". I hope you write more of this type of story.
person beu
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god this story was simply amazing, I love the way you wrote it! I could feel the emotion coming from this story, all of the descriptions were incredibly vivid! you could really feel like the story was actually happening to you, the descriptions were amazing! and I think this is the only story that ive read that contains sakura as a member of ANBU and i think that the part fits her perfectly in this story. You really managed to make all the characters sound real and not OC and I really liked that. I really liked the OC characters also, even though they arent a part of the Naruto series, it actually looked like they were! I cant wait to read more of your fanfiction and i hope to see more sakura and kakashi stories from you in the future! i dont expect you to write a sequel for this story and i dont think that it would suit it either, I mean what would there be to write about after this story? Sakura confronted her biggest foe and now can finally be happy with kakashi. It was a good ending, I liked it very much! U ROCK. Hope to see more from you!
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great ending. Loved your story... til next time :)
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fic! I liked your OCs. I have the worst time trying to create an OC.
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very nice ending to a dark but breathtaking story. The way how you ended it, really tied up the loose end, although there would have been a few moments, where humor would have had a chance ( Tsunde exploding) nonetheless I hope the next story you write will be just as good as this one.
person A.J.
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great end to a remarkable story. I'm really glad Sakura pulled through and that she was finally able to lift some of the weight that was on her soul. Bravo on such a great story and I look forward to reading your other fanfics in progress.
person zeroharm
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not much constructive to say.. just that it has been a fun journey. Looking forward to whatever you dish up next.
person numba1yaoigrl
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww im so sad its over. i loved this story so much. thnx for posting
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH! lol I was so happy to see you'd updated so soon but this is too much!
What a cliffy. Love it :P
person tylendel
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that you've probably written the only fanfic where I actually LIKE Sakura, and I think it takes a certain measure of skill to be able to do that. I hope I get to see more by you soon. Keep it up! ^^