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WRITE MORE!!!! DON'T YOU DARE TURN INTO ONE OF THOSE AUTHORS THAT THINK THEY SUCK AT WRITING AND ABANDONA GOOD, LEGITIMATE STORY!!!also, when you update it, i'd appreciate it if you'd email me. my email address is deannathx@comcast.net

Love it so far. I love when Sakura is portrayed as the strong shinobi she should be. Keep it up!

Oh, brilliant! Love your story. I have to admit though that I found the "mission" part kinda slow moving, but the last 2 chapters rock! I can't wait for Sakura's ANBU team members' reactions to the return of the 2. I hope that you update soon!

I'm glad that I've come across this fic yesterday night and I've just read it all at once, so I'm not reviewing every chapter. Just want to express my feelings towards your fic - IT'S AWESOME!
I love your plot! I like your style of writing. Someparts of your fic is so thought-provoking.

“At the end of the day, when everything is said and done, you’d be surprised about who you can trust. About who you thought would forever be there by your side.”


“You’re the one constant in my life.”

“And you’re the one change in mine.”

These are words I love most.

About the plot part, I like this chapter to heart! It's just that, things should be like that. The way that Sakura treats Sasuke and Naruto is more realistic and they deserve that!

Moreover, I like the development of Sakura. Some may say this is OC but I regard this as development. Characters develop. With the plot going on, if there are any natural changes in the characters' personality, that's just fine with me. That's not Out of Character in my opinion. And I love the development. Sakura is the kind of characters that have so much potential to change, and you got them right.

Last but not least, I love the pairing too, though there aren't much going on between Kakashi and Sakura at the moment, I like the slow but yet steady development. It's more realistic this way. 'Realistic' is one of the key elements I look for in a fanfic and I must say yours is one the most realistic fanfic I've read.

Thanks for writing such a great fanfic, and please do update soon!

All the chapters so far were very wonderful. The understanding of the characters seemed to be very good, though the cursing I believe was out of place. (But that was my opinion) I believe the plot is rather well constructed, though fewer twists than I'm used to. I couldn't stop reading until I finished this chapter, so you do well in drawing your reader in. Keep the great work, I hold out with breathless anticipation for the next installment to this lovely series. All in all, I give this fiction so far a personal 8.7/10. So keep up the wonderful work.

Very good! Her reaction to their return was superb and fit very well into the plot. 10/10! 5 stars! PLZ DONT END THIS!!!!!!! IT HAS SO MUCH MORE LEFT!!!!!!!

lol, personally i love this story and cant wait for the next chapter ^_^ In my opinion you are an awesome writer ^_^

Fabulous installment as always. I'm excited for the next batch.

Awesome chapter! I really liked how you had them realize that leaving Sakura like they did hurt her and now they have to do alot to get her to forgive them. I can't wait to see how the members of Sakura's squad will react to having two people come back that hurt their captain so much with their leaving. I hope that you update soon.

I liked this chapter. Though Sakura being so skilled that she could stop Sasuke so easily is a weird thought. Though I guess he didn't have his guard up? Anyways, the chapter was good, I really can't wait for more, I want Sakura to get her revenge. Please keep up the wonderful work.