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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah! I need to know what happens! I was waiting for the reunion and you didn't disappoint, but I'm waiting for her to tell Kakashi what happened at the castle and tell Naruto and Sasuke about her first team. Seriously can't wait for the next chapter. This story is addictive! Hugs & Kisses!
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well all that pulling out of hair paid off becuase this is by far my favorite chapter. I love it so much, guess its because it has so much raw emotion in it. Snaps to you for that aspect and keep it up!
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! This chapter was good, no need to tear at your hair. I can't wait for the next one!
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter was DEAD ON!! I love that Sakura didn't go all mushy and girly now that the boys are back and that she let them know she isn't full of forgiveness like before. I can not wait for the next chapter to see how the boys handle the changes in her in the daylight. Please update again soon!
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
amazing stuff you've got going on here. I've been following you work since chapter eight-ish or so, and I'd just like to comment that it is SO nice to find a strong female character in Sakura without having her be some sort of GodMod. Love it. Specifically to this chapter, I enjoyed the restrain you showed in going off on Naruto and Saskue. Very artfully crafted, I enjoyed it immensely. Brava, dahling, Brava!
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn...wow...but...damn! so emotional and awsome and wow. i'm speechless and this is so well written its just....did i mention wow?
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this chapter. I can sympathise with how difficult some chapters are to write, but you managed beautifuly. I love reading this story, there is so much to it. The depth and the pain, it's amazing and I really love it all. Thank you for another wonderful chapter, but damn it all, I am more than impatient to read the next one.
I don't know what I'll do till then, other than hope that reveiws encourage you to continue your brilliant writing. I know a good review always does that for me. Well, thanks again, keep up the good work and all that business.
(By the way I haven't decided if I want Sakura to beat the hell out of the boys or let them back into her life... maybe both.. ahh.. till next time)
I don't know what I'll do till then, other than hope that reveiws encourage you to continue your brilliant writing. I know a good review always does that for me. Well, thanks again, keep up the good work and all that business.
(By the way I haven't decided if I want Sakura to beat the hell out of the boys or let them back into her life... maybe both.. ahh.. till next time)
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I love this story so much, you are a great writer!!! I have a question, though. I made a quick scan to chapter 4 in order to grasp a general knowledge of it 'cause it was too much for me to read so I am not sure but was Sakura raped in that mission? THANK YOU
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are way to hard on yourself... It really was an excellent chapter; I just hope that we don't have to wait as long on the next :-) I got so into the confrontation between the old team that I can't wait to read the next one.
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
actually the chapter turned out pretty well, I just wished it was a happy meeting and not a sad one...but with all the crap that she went through and what those 2 did I understand! Good chapter can't wait to read more...hopefully the wait won't be as long! LOL!
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