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Waaaagh! That was awesome! I loved it! They got told! Just the way I hoped it would go. This is such a great story! I've been waiting for this chapter for what seems like forever, but it was worth it! The confrontation was great. But actually, I hope Sasuke and Naruto get more angsty about what they've done. They were the main factors in her changing. They need to see that and not just expect forgiveness. Smarmy bastards, just strolling back in and expecting apologies to make everything better. Anywhoo, great chapter and as always, I'll be waiting with an extreme case of impatience for the next chapter! Update soon, please! I can't wait to see what happens!

I thought it was great and very emotional.

Woah!! Loved it. I'm glad they are finally hashing things out. I can't wait to read on.
Rox

Keep on going! I`m liking it so far! Naruto and Saskue do deserve to get th s@#% beat out of them for leaving Sakura behind! Men are jerks!

GGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dammit! I thought there'd be more!!!!!!!!!!! I was so caught up in reading that I didn't realize 10 chapters had already gone by! Please update soon! I can't WAIT to 'see' the looks on Sasuke-teme & Naruto-dobe's faces when they find out that she's Anbu!!! BOO-YAH!!! Haha! Love this fic.

i really love your writing style. its descriptive and packed with emotion. perfect for a dark fic like this. i havent gotten past chapter ..3? the dark chapter with rape and death and safframate... but i really liked it. the angst, the suffering, you really put it into words that brought my understanding of English to a new level. i like how when they died, you used "fade out", perhaps more as a reference to the title, " fade in", than as a euphemism for "died". everything was really well written. continue your awesome writing *thumbs up and 100000 kudos to you ^^*

@ mia rage badone (near the befinning ---about OCs), i completely agree with you. i read a bleach fic with this awesome oc that could beat the crap outa anyone. got boring after he went shikai. i like this story's ocs. although they are supporting characters, they are superbly written, with a character for each one. each one sort of tells their own story. michi really was a commander at heart, but hideki gives the feeeling of, just as you described him, wise beyond his years. the way he smiles at her, i get the feeling that it is more comradely and reassuring than say, a kakashi smile, and yet, its almost pitying... i just really love how you write. now im gushing. sorry.

im reviewing quite more than my allotted amount...and its just my feelings on this chapter (5). sorry. but it was a laugh. the fight scene was great, if just a smidgen unclear (somewhere near the middle i got lost.) stubborn little shits...lol i love that.

AAAAAARRGH! Damn it! It was a great chapter and I'm extremely happy that Ino blew up at them, but damnit! I hope Sakura and the rest of the team get back to Konoha soon! I can't freaking wait! I've been thinking about this fic ever since my last reveiw and I'm going CRAZY! Please post the next chapter! I can't wait for those two idiots to see what they've helped do to Sakura. Update soon please! I'M BEGGING YOU!

Good chapter, seemed kinda short but maybe that's cause I read it so fast. Anyways, please keep up the great work, I love this story and I really want Sakura to have her revenge!