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for Fiat justitia, ruatcaelum

by setsue

person kaa-san
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it and you for writing it! Thanks!
person KMac
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wellllllll.... still no Saka/Naru lemons (except implied), but I guess I'm satisfied... That was a helluva epilogue.

I do wonder why Itachi is hanging around Konoha, and why someone who had murdered his clan would want to be redeemed. But I guess he was just a child when he did it, and I'm not familiar with the whole of Naruto cannon... was Itachi influenced by Orichimaru, by any chance?
person zeroharm
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I suppose some part of me wanted to see a lemon for this chapter :-) but I do have to hand it to you it was one hell of a story. Best of luck to you and hoping I can spot you under a different name.
person ninjakitty
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thankyou for finishing it, i really enjoyed reading this story
person KMac
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I call for an epilog!! Obstensively this is a Naruto/Sakura fic, but the majority of the lemons (if not all of them) were other-Itachi/Sakura, (Even if he did seem to have home-Naruto's aura). I wanna see at least as much hotness between the main couple, pretty please.

I also want to see Konoha's reaction not just to her being awake, but to how vastly she's changed. (She DOES still have that humongous power/chaka pool, right? And the skills she gained in the other world? Let Konoha see it.)
person kaa-san
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! Is that the end, or is there going to be an epilogue? Or a sequel? The other world had a sad end, but I liked how you had it. It made the present world return that much better. A great read; thanks!
person KMac
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhh.... I was wondering when she'd wake up. Are you going to continue this, or leave it like that? Great story! And if the question hasn't been asked yet, what exactly does the title mean?
person ninjakitty
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so much action pumped into that chapter YAY
person kaa-san
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Ino's pregnant! Are you going to let Hinata and Satoshi be together later in the story? I like Satoshi and think he would balance out Hinata's personality. Is Yuyu the same dragon demon that Zabuza had? About the preceding chapter, I hated that Hinata got hurt, but loved that Anko retained enough of her will to go out the way she wanted. She followed the orders by attacking Sakura, but didn't put her all into it, thereby letting Sakura kill her for good. When is Ino going to tell Sasuke? Till next time, ja!
person ninjakitty
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome, that was really well written.