rate_review Reviews

As much as it severely pains me to know that you’re discontinuing the stories Sanctuary and The Banks of the River Styx, more so the latter since it will not be rewritten anytime soon, I respect your decision since I myself am a graduating college student and do know how difficult it is to keep up with one’s academics when one is writing. Though I can’t admit to being a talented writer I can say without boasting that I know a good story when I see one and it has nothing to do with the amount reviews it receives. Your story sanctuary is a brilliant pearl in the vast sand and is my one of favorites. I find it perfect in every way and have been disappointed that it is severely lacking in reviews at fanfiction.net, I hope this was not one of the reasons that made you want to discontinue. I do apologize for not reviewing often, I was simply too caught up in reading your story and even though I know that’s not a good enough excuse my feelings are sincere.
In my opinion you’re writing is very eloquent and beautiful and your plots are exquisite so I was surprised to find out that you were disappointed in your work. I was jolted when I read your note and have been in shock all day, that’s how much I love your stories apart from it being well written it is one of the few reasons that have kept my wavering interest in naruto and fanfiction from disappearing. Still I wish you the best of luck and I will wait eagerly and anxiously for sanctuary 2.

Though I do hope that you will not alter its plot too drastically, I won’t begrudge you if you did, as much as possible if you can, please keep the plot wherein Naruto is abused, hated and becomes pregnant and maybe you can make the Akatsuki as his second family, instead of removing the Kyuubi from him they adopt him though that may seem ooc. Also I do hope that you include the scenes wherein Kisame and Itachi take care of him it’s rare that they are portrayed in a gentle light without being out of character. And above all please keep the scene where an injured and helpless Naruto pleads for a painless death from Itachi that without a doubt is your story’s most beautiful scene.

Also if it’s not too much trouble can you please post your authors note on F.F so that your other readers will be aware of your decision since I know that many are still avidly waiting for new updates and also so that they may send in their requests or ideas for your future story.
Take care and I do hope that someday you will be able to finish all your stories and when that time comes I am still an avid fan of naruto. May the muse of your art never leave you and may it constantly inspire you to create beautiful stories. Sincerely your loyal reader
LadyMacabre

So does this mean that Kana is dead? o.o

I am so glad I found this story but, I'm sorry but... I'm really confused. I'm trying to get what's going on but from chapter 7 to 9 I am confused. What is going on? Other than that this is good and I'm glad that whore pink bitch is suffering and frankly, I hope Konoha is burned to the ground hte Hokage mountain crushed into dust. For waht they've done, it has no right to remain standing or to be known ever again.

I love your story and I do hope you continue writing. And I'm not just writing this because you requested it. I really do look forward to every one of your updates. I just wish you'd update more frequently.
Sara

Wow... redeemed and still evil! I think the newly risen godhead Kyuubi is going to be fast on its way to becoming a demon once again if it keeps up its plans of revenge.
Naruto needs to reclaim himself and take back control.

Keep up the awesome work!

Oh yay!! An update! D:

I've been dying for this for a long LONG time. I had to go back and reread everything once more to grasp onto the storyline. And once more.....I had soaked my entire tissue box. The angst got to me bad...and I love every minute of it. Thank you so much for continuing this piece. Can't wait for more. Especially now that Naruto is with child, I want to see how Sasuke will react to this. Poor Naruto...he's been through so much.

I'm thinking that Minato should be attached to a different bird. It might just be me, but a seagull doesn't convey Yondaime-ness very well. Your story is very much awesome!! Though I wonder what on earth made Jiraiya do THAT to Naruto. I still can't decide if Kyuubi is being evil or not. I hope to see more of this great stuff soon!!

i love this story and hope you continue it i find it really well written and it really grabs one's attention
do you have any artwork to show the changes in appearances? and is Kisame still male or was he turned female as well?

I just found this story, and I absolutely love it. In most cases with stories in which Naruto has been abused the author makes him Mary-sueish and therefore very irritating, but you have managed to pull this off very nicely. I also find myself totally in love with Kisame's character, which I haven't been before. I wish I could help you with your story, but unfortunately I have my own huge undertaking to consider and thus am unable. Good luck, though, and I hope you find someone to help!

Wow I really love how you've written Itachi and Kisame, especially this chapter its one of the best ones yet and very well written. I think you are one of the few people who actually bothered to give Kisame's character some depth so he doesn't come across as just some sidekick. Anyway loved everything about this chapter and how everything played out!