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for Sanctuary

by AkashaEmily

person btTara
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1 was so sad! I would be crying right now! My eyes were watering, but I didn't want to look stupid if my family walked in on me so I took my eyes off the fanfic for some short breaks and went back to reading it. It's so lovely. *eyes are starting to water again* Poor Naruto! Everyone's being mean to him but his enemies (now that's ironic!)
person btTara
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
errrrr. Chapter 2 review. I like Parent Kisame! It's funny and amusing how he knowingly dresses Naruto up. Going to read the next chapter now.
person btTara
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha, ha, ha, if I didn't know Kisame was doing this because he wouldn't lose his job then I'd say he was being possessive. In a parenthood like sense.
person btTara
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man you just know how to make shopping so sad. . . . .
person btTara
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mah, I've always dislike Sakura, but really that doesn't mean I like how she is in this fanfic. I'll be honest I don't like this chapter. chapter 5 that is.
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
darn it .. u had me crying while reading the 1st chapter! And a Kisame's perspective was refreshing as well as him dressing up naruto as a girl was amusing .. then there's itachi - does he have a chance with Naruto?? I'm incline to think that maybe Kyuubi is more accepting of him.*ItaNaru fangirl squeal!*

ah sakura, what a vindictive conniving bitch - i actually like her in the cannon after the 3 yrs time skip
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see that you updated! This fic is really interesting. Goodness, I'm actually starting to love those two kidnappers. XD
person Luna_Meow
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's me again. I take back my previous words, since your story needs more appreciation.

I used to cry whenever I read very sad fics, such as deathfics or the like. Although I don't do it anymore, it took a while for me to fully understand this story and imagine myself being in Naruto's place. Since English isn't my native language, I have to print it out and re-read it many times. (Not all fics deserves this special "treatment" though :)

After considerable time used for reading and searching out on some of the facts, I find this story really interesting; sad it nearly bring me to tears, hilarious it made me laugh, and I couldn't help but to adore Naruto, Itachi and Kisame. Itachi and Kisame aren't my favourite character - mine is Naruto anyway - but you have shown their softer side despite the fact that they are Akatsuki, despite the fact that they merely wanted Kyuubi.

I'm also fascinated by these points you mentioned in the story:

1. "...the ability to bear children only among the many Naruto had planned to use to help Sasuke restart his clan."
2. "If Naruto could carry a baby to term and still have a penis then he could surely pull off the act of pretending to be a girl."

I had never, ever noticed that Kyuubi / Kitsune has the ability to change gender regardless of whatever gender they may have. Also, become a woman and actually give birth. Only when you mentioned them, and I searched in the Net for possible reasons, it was true. Yeah, Naruto could be a woman, it amazed me a lot.

And now I have a distant imagery of Naruto being one of the candidates to be Sasuke's future wife (laughs).

Hating Konoha now (I was surprised on how you described the people there, hating him, saying sarcastic words and such it hurts me too), it's refreshing to see Naruto actually being welcomed by people who didn't know him - although as a girl - and I was glad for him.

But I can't help wondering if Naruto really, actually wanted to leave Konoha and follow Kisame and Itachi back to Akatsuki.

To tell you the truth, I didn't cry reading this story, but I did cry when I recalled it on the bed before I sleep. It was a great story, keep it up, and I hope to read the new chapter whenever I have the time. :)
person Luna_Meow
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a really cute story :D An angst-ridden Naruto found comfort in Itachi and Kisame's hands (although they're enemies... or so it's said), lovely! I have been liking Naruto for his personality and this is just love~ Although I can't help but wonder how does Sasuke actually feel towards Naruto, does he really despise Naruto? Since Naruto can't help but think Sasuke hates him for apparently no reason (just because of Sakura's thoughts).

I'm not good in writing reviews, but I love this story, so please keep it up! :)
person kedra
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I really love your works. I can't stop crying from reading just the first chapter. You really have a way of wringing out emotions out of your characters. And when I checked your profile and saw that you're also writing Banks of the River Styx I realized why your writing's so familiar. I can't wait for the next update on both of your stories. And even though I'm tired of reading fics where one character becomes an animal, I'll give your other one a go too. Good luck with your endeavors and hope you update soon. :j