rate_review Reviews

wow, this story is showing a lot of forethought in it's format. i really appreciate the depth and range of emotions that the characters express, and your description of them. it adds a lot of texture to a story. i really enjoyed the first four chapters. i look forward to seeing what you do with the rest of the story.

awwww cute. Naruto really needs to realize that the world is a bigger place. I kinda hope that he ends up with Itachi though. I think Itachi was probably sick of the way people treated him back home so they have somehing in common. If Naruto can change his features, can he change his gender as well? That would be cool if he could change genders at will. I think foxes in japanese legends can do that as well, so maybe kyubbi can? Anyways, keep updating, I love this story.

EEEEEEEEEEEP!!!! You updated!!! Sorry I couldnLt have left a reveiw when the fic did come out. I was out *-* SHOPPING!! And what a coincidence, Naruto goes out shopping too! I felt so relieved when I found out that Naruto could get pregnant...I guess itLs just because I love MPreg so much XD

Praise for such a wonderful experience with death. Naruto was on the verge of death, no? Either way, praise for that wonderful experience at the begining of the chapter! I loved it every word of it!! You made it seem as though youLve actually been there and as if you already know what happens when death knocks on you door...that, though, kind of scares me o,o .

Shijun! Contester! Pregunta! „r„€„„‚„€„ƒ! QUESTION!!! You made Sameheden (forgot how itLs spelled) into a living thinking object? ThatLs really ineresting...I donLt think ILve ever read a fic where Sameheden is a living thinking object...thatLs so cool!! Next question... is that KisameLs really last name or did you make it up??

-Damp *Keep up the awesome work!!*

I'm sooooooooooo glad u continued this story, UR STORY'S MY ABSOLYTE FAV! Pleze don't pair him with sasuke, I'd rather he ended up with Kisame or Itachi, or mebbe Kyuubi (once he's realeased), in my opinion Sasuke doesn't deserve naruto, but that's just my feeble opinion ^_^
UPDATE SOON ONEGAI! *gives u chocolate*

Yay!! There's more. I just love Naruto!! He's so cute, looking after Kisame and Itachi like that. Naruto's finally realizing that there is more to life than hate and pain, but he's so very scared because that's all he know and all he expects. I hope before he reaches aki(red cloud people) he realises he wants to live.
Bye bye!!

Wait--Jiraiya poured poison into Naruto's ears...THAT SICK BASTARD!

*packs up several painful torture devises* JIRAIYA! Your heartless corpse is mine!

PS Great chapter! UPDATE SOON!

*runs off to find and slowly torment Jiraiya*

Talk about culture shock! Poor Naruto!
What're Itachi and Kisame going to say when they see the supplies?
Good job, and can't wait to read more!

Very interesting development. And Samheda did not hurt Naruto. If he's taking care of the owner then i would hope he wouldn't. I hope Naruto gains back some confidence. It's very unusual how his captors are turning out to be his caretakers as well. Very intriguing. Great chap. Update soon!

Yay, new chapter.

Excellent as always. I eagerly await the next chapter. No rush.

"Naruto could do this- if he could carry a baby to term and still have a penis then he could surely pull off the act of pretending to be a girl."

This line is curious. So Naruto got pregnant? Or is he just speaking of his ability obtained from being the Kyuubi's vessel? In any case, the plot has been very interesting and I would love to see where Naruto's future will go. What has Tsunade done and is she the only one who knows that Naruto has gone missing? When will everyone else (especially Sasuke) realize the blond is with the Akatsuki? Also, what is up with Jiraiya's attitude? Did he truly dislike Naruto, or was this a ploy for something else? Am I just looking too deeply for something not there?

Lots of questions, which I think is good. It means I highly anticipate the next chapter. Good luck!