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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DAMN YOU!!! you made me cry in the first chapter...T___T
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting. i would like to read more on where you are taking this too...keep updating. thank you
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I absolutely love Kisame! I'd pay good money to actually see him act that way. It just goes to show how easily Naruto can influence people, even if he isn't trying to. Loved the second chapter and I am so glad to see you continued this.
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! ~jumps up and down~ I'm so glad you decided to continue with this story. Also, I'm amazed to find that Naruto is alive. Anyway, please keep up the good work and update soon. Ja.
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww dat was cute i really hope update on a reg. basics but if not
its ok i understand dat ur only thoughts 4 dis story were dat of a
one-shot. but watever uu plan on doin no dat many will b waitin 4
ur next update best of luck. AoiKitsune =^-^=
its ok i understand dat ur only thoughts 4 dis story were dat of a
one-shot. but watever uu plan on doin no dat many will b waitin 4
ur next update best of luck. AoiKitsune =^-^=
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Continue, please.
I'd like to see everyone else's POV either during Naruto's pain (death?) or after or both.
Interesting twist that it turned out to be Itachi at the end of this chapter. I actually thought it WAS Sasuke at first. Though I have to say that I can't really see Itachi offering comfort to anyone, much less Naruto. Not at all.
This fic still rocks, though.
I'd like to see everyone else's POV either during Naruto's pain (death?) or after or both.
Interesting twist that it turned out to be Itachi at the end of this chapter. I actually thought it WAS Sasuke at first. Though I have to say that I can't really see Itachi offering comfort to anyone, much less Naruto. Not at all.
This fic still rocks, though.
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for continuing! I'm starting to like nice-Kisame. I hope Naruto gets a happy ending with someone (anyone at this point)!
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*wonders briefly how he missed the 'Next Chapter' link before his previous review*
Nice chapter. Poor Kisame. He's one of my favorite characters and I felt sorry for him here. What a temper provoke.
Update ASAP. What happens next?
Nice chapter. Poor Kisame. He's one of my favorite characters and I felt sorry for him here. What a temper provoke.
Update ASAP. What happens next?
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
really like it,hope to see the update soon!
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm having some problems imagining Naruto in a kimono but I guess considering the situation... Well anyway, I really liked the chapter.