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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
pease post the rest it made me cry. i would like to see how you would finshs this story
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So sad! You made me cry, you did. It was beautiful though in it's sorrow. I wonder where you could go from here with Naruto dead though?
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There needs to be more. You cant leave it at that. I need to know what happens next.
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you so have to post more this is like so cool
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a very touching one shot....however you left off with such an intriguing last few paragraphs there that i think it would be awesome if you added another chap or two just to cure this damn curiosity. Great job.
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This made me cry, and I don't cry easily. Please post the rest of the story.
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
post the rest this is a great story keep it up
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That almost made me cry at how descriptive it was.
Very well written. I really think you should do a follow up to end the story.
As others have said I want to know the reactions and outcome.
Very well written. I really think you should do a follow up to end the story.
As others have said I want to know the reactions and outcome.
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
T-T dats soo sad...naruto NOOOOOOO!!! i would add up another
ch. on the views of naruto's death from some of the ch. or it
cn becme a story, but wats a story w/o naruto...humm well its
up 2 u. best of luck really did like it...ja ne AoiKitsune =^x^=
ch. on the views of naruto's death from some of the ch. or it
cn becme a story, but wats a story w/o naruto...humm well its
up 2 u. best of luck really did like it...ja ne AoiKitsune =^x^=