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Okay, quick question [Yes I l rererererererererererereread this story.] so right now now Naruto is 15?

-Damp

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Wow, first chapter and i'm already spouting fat tears. This just oozes of angstiness. And I'm loving it.

Btw. I love your profile picture, it's just so....so...PERFECT!!!! Me luvles <3

when I saw an update I was so exited but then I realized there was nothing new.
so what's up?
does this update mean you will soon continue?
I sure hope so.
I've had your profile on my fav for a long time and I love all your stories and am looking forward to reading more.
thanks for your hard work.

Love Robyn

hmm it said chapter 7 was new but thats been up a while, unless you jsut ment an update for it. ohwel i can't wait for chapter 8! i went on a vacation for a week and half ay threw found myself wondering if your fic updated. lol keep up the good work.

Hi, Just wanted to say I'm enjoying the story though at some parts, I do get a bit confused. It happens mostly when you switch scenes. Like one minute you'll be with Naruto then here's Sasuke and whats going on with him. Maybe a short little page break would help with that. Just wanna make sure that you don't make the page break too long because when you post it, it makes the reader have to read left to right and that's irritating to say the least.

Another thing, You might wanna go through and correct you 'ANBU',

In some chapters, I believe chapter one or two and in chapter six, you have it as AMBU. ANBU is correct and stands for Ansatsu Senjutsu Tokushu Butai: ANBU (translation: Elite Assassination & Tactical Force),

Please post again soon, I'd like to see where you're going with this.

I absolutely loved this past chapter, I really loved how detailed the scene at Naruto's hospital bed was. It was very visionary. I also loved how Itachi or mainly Kisame went out of his way to save Naruto even at the cost of his life. It was nice to just see more of his perspective and get an insight into him. Even throughout the circumstance and even though none of the two Akatsuki members would probably admit it, they have grown closer.

Wonderful series with so much angst it makes my gut churn.

i thot i lost the bookmark to this fic but luckily i managed to find it and i'm glad that u had posted a new chapter .. though it shld be ANBU not AMBU.

I think i pity tsunade that she only just realised something is terribly wrong with naruto after so long had passed

oh i'm wondering about the pairings .. will it be itanaru♥, sasunaru or others?

lokking fwd to future chapters

♥

Please update soon. I love reading your story and its been a long time since you've updated so please add more I really want to know how this ends.

Why do I always stumble upon beautifully written depressive stories when I am least likely to be able to cope with reading them? *head-desk*
This was so well written I am still crying...the atmosphere, the characters' actions and thoughts...it all fit together.
My favourite scene was when Itachi said to Kisame at the end: "Don't."