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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kisame is great. This is one of the very few stories where he actually has a personality and his helplessness regarding Naruto is very endearing.
His thankfulness about always practicing safer sex was hilarious.
Great chapter.
His thankfulness about always practicing safer sex was hilarious.
Great chapter.
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was very interesting to get Sasuke's sight on the situation. Though I wonder why he isn't fighting the councils delusions of grandeur, since I can't imagine the Uchiha clan(or any other clan)to allow strangers to choose their wives/husbands for them or pressure them into procreation. Konoha would be deserted faster than it takes to count to three(...or the council members assasinated).
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was one rollercoaster chapter, so much happened, so many heavy emotions were expressed, I feel exhausted after reading it.
Sakura is one obsessed b**** and it's really too bad some ANBU came to save her(...by the way where did they come from and why).
The Itachi/Naruto moment at the end was heartbreaking.
Sakura is one obsessed b**** and it's really too bad some ANBU came to save her(...by the way where did they come from and why).
The Itachi/Naruto moment at the end was heartbreaking.
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love your story can't wait to read more.
If you're not a professional writer then you should be. Please quit your day job and write.
I would love to read a happy ending but this is your story so do as you please and I'll still love the story.
Good luck to you. I just want to let you know that your writing is appreciated.
If you're not a professional writer then you should be. Please quit your day job and write.
I would love to read a happy ending but this is your story so do as you please and I'll still love the story.
Good luck to you. I just want to let you know that your writing is appreciated.
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my lord...I almost jumped off of my seat when I saw your update! *flails wildly* I LOVE this fic!!! This fic had been reread over and over and I cried on all the angsty parts, especially on the part where Sasuke found Naruto outside his property. Their exchange of words gripped and tore my heart open and I cried....really cried. Oh Sasuke....what did you do to our Kitsune? He's so broken up inside. I was so glad to read again on what had happened to Sakura. That bitch never gives up and deserves the beating she received. Grrrr......I seriously cannot wait to read more from you! You have an amazing writing style which leaves me wanting for more. Hope Naruto will see Sasuke again and that he knows he is loved and needed. Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful piece. :D
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you updated!!!! Yippy, skippy, joy, joy!!! I love this story! It comes from an angle that few other stories seem to take. I love it when Itachi and Kisame end up liking Naruto! Hope to see more of this great story soon!
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that. was. an. isanely. intense. fucking. chapter. and I love you for it!! my god, I couldn't stop reading once I started. damn. I'm still being haunted by the images of kisame's hand in naru's gut. *shudders* looking forward to your next update. happy v-day!
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wohoo! Another great chapter!
*does happy dance*
Thank you.
*does happy dance*
Thank you.
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would love it if you hadn't left it with a cliff hanger but other than that YEAHHH! so good to know you are still writing this story. hope life will work out for you better so that you can spend more time writting ^_^:
I'm selfish I know.
I'm selfish I know.
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, before I review for reals I have to send you this review of my reaction when I saw that you updated today. . .
EARLIER
Damp sitting in her seat and looking through AFF's latest updates. When she suddenly sees that Sanctuary was updated earlier today. After double-checking, she screams,
"OHMIGOSH!!! SHE UPDATED!! HOLY CRAP!!! CALL THE NEWS CHANNEL!! CALL AN AMBULENCE!! CALL THE POLICE! CALL THE PRESIDENT! CALL THE GODDAMN POPE! CALL SOMEBODY!!"
END OF DRAMATIZATION
-Damp *dies*
EARLIER
Damp sitting in her seat and looking through AFF's latest updates. When she suddenly sees that Sanctuary was updated earlier today. After double-checking, she screams,
"OHMIGOSH!!! SHE UPDATED!! HOLY CRAP!!! CALL THE NEWS CHANNEL!! CALL AN AMBULENCE!! CALL THE POLICE! CALL THE PRESIDENT! CALL THE GODDAMN POPE! CALL SOMEBODY!!"
END OF DRAMATIZATION
-Damp *dies*