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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh. Poor Naruto, just when you think he's going to get out of the cooking pan, he falls right into the fire! I feel so bad for you Naruto! Once again! PRAISE for the details you put into the story! I looove the little story about the freaky guy that was obssessed with his 'chosen' girlfriends. That story really sounds very modern. Sounds like something that would happen in this era and time. That's kinda creepy o.O *has scared herself dumb*
The little 'clinic', is what I like to call it, just reminded me soooo much of my clinic here where I live. It also reminded me of the hospital I was at that one time. ANYWAYS, I love the little nurse that was the only on left there after all the other DOCTORS left. She was just soooo funny, I would have laughed had the scene you painted with your words not been so dismal and dark. I loved the nurse because she reminded me so much of the nurse that was attending me at the hospital that one time I reviewed. And I agee with Kisame, if I ever find those doctors they Will. Face. My. Wrath.
The scene with Kisame sticking his arm into the chakra, scared me a lot because the scene from Saw III ( At least I think it's Saw III.) where in order for the lady detective to free herself, she has to stick her hand into the jar of acid *shivers* in order to get the key to free herself from this device that going to tear her into two. . .Yeah, SCARY. But I loooove the fact that he wanted Naruto to get better and when he saw that the kunai wasn't melting along with the other things, that he was willing to stick his hand into the chaos that was the chakra *hearts pop out of eyes*
I couldn't stop laughing (Okay first I held my breath to see what would happen, but then my mind flashed an image of what that scene would look like, and I couldn't help myself.) when at the end of the Naruto's-Life-Is-Hanging-In-The-Balance-AGAIN scene Kisame trips, bringing down the Nurse and Itachi with him.
*get's evil smirk on her face when she rereads the sentence that says that Sakura's ninja life is RUINED FOR GOOD*
I wanted to hug someone SO. BADLY. When I read that little sentence. DIE SAKURA (I love Sakura, but in this case, I'm willing to make an exception.) DAH!!! ACK!!! GAHHHHHHHH!!! Tsunade! If only you would have payed more attention to our little kitsune Naruto sooner, NONE of this drama would have unfolded. But hey, who knows, it proubably would have stilled happend. (There's a reason fan-girls/boys are fearsome people.) And anyways Tsunade, nobody can predict the future. NOT EVEN SHE WHO WRITES IT! :P
Aww Sweetie. I'll wait for the next chapter. But I REFUSE to wait a YEAR for the next update. *Hint Hint Wink Wink* PRAISE TO YOU AND YOUR BRILLIANT MIND! Can't wait for the next installment! Loves and Kisses!
-Damp *I am not implying that it takes you a year to update a story. I'm just mearly saying that a year is my limit.* XD
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Because of the fact that I am soooo excited that you updated (and greatly saddened by the fact that I just finished the chapter) if there are mistakes in this GODAWFULLY long review, please fogive!
The little 'clinic', is what I like to call it, just reminded me soooo much of my clinic here where I live. It also reminded me of the hospital I was at that one time. ANYWAYS, I love the little nurse that was the only on left there after all the other DOCTORS left. She was just soooo funny, I would have laughed had the scene you painted with your words not been so dismal and dark. I loved the nurse because she reminded me so much of the nurse that was attending me at the hospital that one time I reviewed. And I agee with Kisame, if I ever find those doctors they Will. Face. My. Wrath.
The scene with Kisame sticking his arm into the chakra, scared me a lot because the scene from Saw III ( At least I think it's Saw III.) where in order for the lady detective to free herself, she has to stick her hand into the jar of acid *shivers* in order to get the key to free herself from this device that going to tear her into two. . .Yeah, SCARY. But I loooove the fact that he wanted Naruto to get better and when he saw that the kunai wasn't melting along with the other things, that he was willing to stick his hand into the chaos that was the chakra *hearts pop out of eyes*
I couldn't stop laughing (Okay first I held my breath to see what would happen, but then my mind flashed an image of what that scene would look like, and I couldn't help myself.) when at the end of the Naruto's-Life-Is-Hanging-In-The-Balance-AGAIN scene Kisame trips, bringing down the Nurse and Itachi with him.
*get's evil smirk on her face when she rereads the sentence that says that Sakura's ninja life is RUINED FOR GOOD*
I wanted to hug someone SO. BADLY. When I read that little sentence. DIE SAKURA (I love Sakura, but in this case, I'm willing to make an exception.) DAH!!! ACK!!! GAHHHHHHHH!!! Tsunade! If only you would have payed more attention to our little kitsune Naruto sooner, NONE of this drama would have unfolded. But hey, who knows, it proubably would have stilled happend. (There's a reason fan-girls/boys are fearsome people.) And anyways Tsunade, nobody can predict the future. NOT EVEN SHE WHO WRITES IT! :P
Aww Sweetie. I'll wait for the next chapter. But I REFUSE to wait a YEAR for the next update. *Hint Hint Wink Wink* PRAISE TO YOU AND YOUR BRILLIANT MIND! Can't wait for the next installment! Loves and Kisses!
-Damp *I am not implying that it takes you a year to update a story. I'm just mearly saying that a year is my limit.* XD
P.S.
Because of the fact that I am soooo excited that you updated (and greatly saddened by the fact that I just finished the chapter) if there are mistakes in this GODAWFULLY long review, please fogive!
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I glad to see an update. I can't wait for more.
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story looking forward the next chapters. I am curious to find out how you plan to tackle
Naruto tranforming into a female and seducing Sasuke (well Kyuubi seducing Sasuke), and not
to mention Sakura. Not to mention the whole rape issue, Kisamie & Itachi, and Konohas' secret weapon.
Naruto tranforming into a female and seducing Sasuke (well Kyuubi seducing Sasuke), and not
to mention Sakura. Not to mention the whole rape issue, Kisamie & Itachi, and Konohas' secret weapon.
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa first off, let me say not only am I glad you updated but the drama is seriously building!! I was reading wiht wide-eyes over what was going on in the ER and what you wrote kinda explained a bit what happened before Naru took off running. I just hope he's okay... I still think Sakura should be dead but wiht her now being beyond hideious disfigured I hope she kills herself. And now, well now I have a greater hatred for Konoha. I admit, I am a bit confused about what is going on but this fic, wow! I will continue to read it to the end and jsut take your time. You put a lot of effort in your writing and it shows. I wonder what will happen in the next chapter, especially when Tsunade finds out jsut what happened to that emo prick. Gah only reason Itachi didn't kill that brat was because he wasn't worth it (that's my rage talking right now).
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GOD I love this fanfic. I thought you had disappeared on me for good. But this chapter :melts: You are perfection and Itachi worthy :glomps: I'll beta, I'll be your slave. Just don't deny me anymore. PLEASE
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:passes out: you can be so cruel, and this chapter was a little confusing, but I got to love a bossy nurse bullying Itachi around. And Ki-kun... I officially think he's my favorite in this through - out... and as much as it hurts. I will wait patiently. Oh and can you please, please, let Jirayia slip about raping Naruto so that SOMEONE can FUCK HIM UP :shakes fist: Thank You!
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is just wow. I hope you haven't abandoned it and that there will be more soonish.
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow so much going on here, I like it. I hope Kyuubi never uses Sasuke's sperm to create a baby for Naruto though because with the way he was acting I am not sure if he deserves Naru-chan. From the fight scene with Sakura it looks like she survived which breaks my heart because she really is a bitch in and out of the show! I am so happy that Itachi is going to try to save Naru-chan because although he wants to die he really does deserve to be happy and live, hopefully he gets both. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woah! You've gotta write more of this!!!! This is fantastic! Please update soon!
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December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please, please post a new chapter I am very much looking forward to an update I really like this story and I want to know where're your going with it and what is all going on.