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December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon i realy want to see what happens.
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Personally I am not happy about Naruto having Sasuke's child. In my opinion emo-boy doesn't deserve him. I admit, I am looking forward to Naruto's reaction once Itachi and Kisame state their intention to save him. The two skilled ninja could go a long way in convincing the blond of his own skill and talent. After all, Naruto respects them both.
About Kyuubi, I know the fox plans on staying with Naruto. However, once he/she/it is healed their is no reason the demon should stay inside Naruto. Can Kyuubi shapeshift like the kitsune in legends?
About Kyuubi, I know the fox plans on staying with Naruto. However, once he/she/it is healed their is no reason the demon should stay inside Naruto. Can Kyuubi shapeshift like the kitsune in legends?
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November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto! He always gets hurt. And Sakura, that bitch! She's just mad that Sasuke doesn't love her and ,ight love someone else. I can't believe Itachi is going to try and save Naruto.. now how is he going to do that. He's a criminal and is part of a dangerous society, but at least he's finally starting to feel something.
please continue this, it's really good.
please continue this, it's really good.
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMG!!! This was such a fantastic read that I'm literally incoherent! O__O I practically cried in every chapter in reading Naruto's pain and suffering. I hope HOPE you will make this a SasuNaru fic, because I feel that deep down in there, that Sasuke truly does love and care for the blond. Reading on the part in where Itachi and Kisame were protective over him was heartwarming and sweet. Once again, thank you for sharing this wonderful fic. I love it so very much. Please do keep up the awesome work! Will wait patiently for more future posts. :D
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October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
PLease please please!
i hate to be a bother and i know you have a life outside of the net, but pease don't forget that the people who read and comment and wait for you to update, really really love your fic! please don't forget us way out here!
PLease please please!
i hate to be a bother and i know you have a life outside of the net, but pease don't forget that the people who read and comment and wait for you to update, really really love your fic! please don't forget us way out here!
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow talk about a tear jerker. I couldn't stop crying through this. My heart goes out to porr Naruto always the misunderstood, mistreated and hated one even by those he loves and holds near and dear to his heart.
It sounds like he might be pregnant in this when he is standing at the door to the inn, but then Kyuubi said that he prevented that so in that regard I am confused. I thought this had MPreg in it, and if so will it be from Sasuke or Itachi? I'm wondering if both Kisame and Itachi are starting to have feelings for Naruto (maybe not love but some sort of affection)since they are going out of their way to keep him alive. I know that they are doing it so that they can take him to Leader to extract Kyuubi but now Itachi is seriously thinking in his heart that he is going to help Naruto to live (something like that).
It amazing that no one really questions that Naruto isn't there, that Sasuke wants him back, but still doesn't really care.
Oh and I have to say I hate Sakura in this story. I kept thinking that Sasuke should have hauled off and beat the crap out of her when she was in his bed. Stupid little slut never gets the hint even if it is beaten into her she still thinks that Sasuke wants her...Arrgghhhh. Please, please I beg you, get rid of her. I am a Sakura fan in the Anime (at least the Shippuuden series) but I just can't take her in this story. It took all my patient and will to keep reading when I read her part and talking back to the screen too.
Will Naruto ever find happiness in this story or will it always just be so dark and painful for him? Will Itachi and possibly Kisame take to being a family with Naruto and if Naruto is to get pregnant in this story will it be by Itachi in some future chapter?
I am a serious Sasu/Naru Naru/Sasu (doesn't really matter to me which is which as long as they are together) fan, but in this fic I am really liking the idea of maybe Naruto with Itachi or Kisame. Interesting combination.
Well I really am looking forward to your next update and sometime before the end of the story or at the end I will know the answers to my questions.
It sounds like he might be pregnant in this when he is standing at the door to the inn, but then Kyuubi said that he prevented that so in that regard I am confused. I thought this had MPreg in it, and if so will it be from Sasuke or Itachi? I'm wondering if both Kisame and Itachi are starting to have feelings for Naruto (maybe not love but some sort of affection)since they are going out of their way to keep him alive. I know that they are doing it so that they can take him to Leader to extract Kyuubi but now Itachi is seriously thinking in his heart that he is going to help Naruto to live (something like that).
It amazing that no one really questions that Naruto isn't there, that Sasuke wants him back, but still doesn't really care.
Oh and I have to say I hate Sakura in this story. I kept thinking that Sasuke should have hauled off and beat the crap out of her when she was in his bed. Stupid little slut never gets the hint even if it is beaten into her she still thinks that Sasuke wants her...Arrgghhhh. Please, please I beg you, get rid of her. I am a Sakura fan in the Anime (at least the Shippuuden series) but I just can't take her in this story. It took all my patient and will to keep reading when I read her part and talking back to the screen too.
Will Naruto ever find happiness in this story or will it always just be so dark and painful for him? Will Itachi and possibly Kisame take to being a family with Naruto and if Naruto is to get pregnant in this story will it be by Itachi in some future chapter?
I am a serious Sasu/Naru Naru/Sasu (doesn't really matter to me which is which as long as they are together) fan, but in this fic I am really liking the idea of maybe Naruto with Itachi or Kisame. Interesting combination.
Well I really am looking forward to your next update and sometime before the end of the story or at the end I will know the answers to my questions.
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
holy shit. i don't know how you made something so depressing so hopelessly amazing and fantastic and beautiful, but you did. this is truely a beautiful story. your writting is eloquent and the characters are tragic yet not without the occational happy/funny moment. i love it! *HUG* thank you so much! and please please please please write more soon because i will be eagerly awaiting your updates. ^_^ thank you again. *kiss* you are amazing.
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October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
REALLY GOOD FIC!!!... I couldn't stop crying... poor Naruto...and good-bye Sakura! However I got a question... Is it end or atleast have more of SasuNaru? And really like Itachi and Kisame's behaviour on your fic, cruel but humen... nice!
Wonder what will happen when Naruto has kids? Twins maybe... lol cant wait to see how Kisame/Itachi/Sasuke will do!
Cant wait...Keep up the good work !!!! Update soon!^_^
Wonder what will happen when Naruto has kids? Twins maybe... lol cant wait to see how Kisame/Itachi/Sasuke will do!
Cant wait...Keep up the good work !!!! Update soon!^_^
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October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto. Great fic. I really enjoy reading it. Look forward to the next chapter. Until next time, take care, and god bless.
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October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GAH! *falls backward* WHAAAAAAAT!!!!!! 0.0 Oh that tears it.*calls Garra from before Shukaku was ripped out* Ano sa, ano sa Gaara-sama!
Gaara: Hn? What do you want?
T.W.: See him *points at Jiraya* Well he *whispers in Gaara's ear*
Gaara: *exuding murderous aura* Did he?
T.W.: *watches as Gaara goes Shukaku on Jiraya's ass* Hn good, and as for YOU *turns to a tied up Sasuke-baka* I'm going to do something I swore I'd never ever do *shudders and* Oi! Orochimaru!
Orochimaru: You're actually calling me? Has hell frozen over?
T.W.: It's a possibility. Anyway here *kicks Sasuke over to Orochimaru* he's all yours. Next *grabs frying pan and hit Iruka over the head, followed by Kakashi for good measure* Kyuubi! Go lecture Tsunade please?!
Kyuubi: With pleasure.
T.W.: And now to complete my venting *grabs Sakura voodoo doll, throws it in a blender, and hits the high speed* There now I can give a slightly coherent review. Jiraya desperately needs his ass kicked to a bloody barely twitching mass and, for some reason, I think Hinata is the one who needs to do it. I had major squishies with the end where Itachi decides to save Naruto and of course I did some major crying. The whole chapter was excellent and I'm itchy for more. Please keep up the wonderful work.
Gaara: Hn? What do you want?
T.W.: See him *points at Jiraya* Well he *whispers in Gaara's ear*
Gaara: *exuding murderous aura* Did he?
T.W.: *watches as Gaara goes Shukaku on Jiraya's ass* Hn good, and as for YOU *turns to a tied up Sasuke-baka* I'm going to do something I swore I'd never ever do *shudders and* Oi! Orochimaru!
Orochimaru: You're actually calling me? Has hell frozen over?
T.W.: It's a possibility. Anyway here *kicks Sasuke over to Orochimaru* he's all yours. Next *grabs frying pan and hit Iruka over the head, followed by Kakashi for good measure* Kyuubi! Go lecture Tsunade please?!
Kyuubi: With pleasure.
T.W.: And now to complete my venting *grabs Sakura voodoo doll, throws it in a blender, and hits the high speed* There now I can give a slightly coherent review. Jiraya desperately needs his ass kicked to a bloody barely twitching mass and, for some reason, I think Hinata is the one who needs to do it. I had major squishies with the end where Itachi decides to save Naruto and of course I did some major crying. The whole chapter was excellent and I'm itchy for more. Please keep up the wonderful work.