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by AkashaEmily

schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG an update! I was waiting for this! Wow, poor Naruto. I gotta say i feel terrible for him. Like seriously. At the same time, the fact that Itachi and Kisame are taking care of him is so touching. Mixed feelings. That Sakura. You really made me hate her here LOL. Nice going. Great chap. Update soon!
person Zrina
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful chapter! The emotions are so raw!! I can't help but hope Sakura doesn't see a medic-nin in time to save her hand! Will be waiting anxiously for the next chapter!
person Rosebud
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, after the last chapter, I was really wondering where you were going to take this... but wow, with this chapter you just pulled me right back in and omg, I loved it. I can't wait to read the part and I hope that you'll update soon. I'm glad that you got your muse back! ^^ Keep up the awesome work, this story is one of my favorites! ^^
person btTara
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How about Sasuke finding out that Naruto and Itachi got married! XD
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my god you almost made me cry !!
But that is besides that point - it was lovely and beautiful and poor naruto
I am happy to see it wasn't a one shot ... onto the next chapter
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your Kisame!!
"Kisame had so not just thought the word ‘yummy.’ He had not and anyone who said different would be fed to Samheda. In. Pieces" <- Had me laughing to myself (if i did it out loud i would get weird looks)
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I still love Kisame! And the whole bar scene was great (okay not really a bar scene - pub thingy)
They really do care about Naruto ... kind of ... too bad they still want to take Kyuubi out of him ... i hope they change their minds
And shabam! To the council and messing around in Naruto's life - they desire not to know
And poor stupid Sasuke *tisk tisk*
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh! nuuuuuu!! *sigh* right up until the end-ish part, when kyuubi was seducing sasuke, i was following just fine. the only thing i don't get is how this will get naruto over sasuke. but whatever. i hope to see more of this.~
person Kaishiou
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh no...i wish there was a next button now for me to click on now. this has gotten very interesting from the last i read. please continue!
person SomePyro
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, this story is so well written! The way you made it, it just sort of flows when you read it, it's very nice. Though it may or may not be meant in such a way the sort of KisaNaru hints interested me a lot. I love reading odd pairing, though it's really hard to find them well written, but I really enjoyed reading that part of your story.