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jeez, the IRONY

zOMG! A GOOD het fic! Sadly, many of the het fics I've read recently have been total junk, but not this one! <3 I particularly like the open ending *nodnod*

Elderly women are raped too; it's about violence. I was so hopeful to hear Sakura speak of wisdom, confidence, maybe nuturing her students. I understand wanting to look 20 believe me (I'm 42). It's like she was punished for it. Ok, Tsunada does the Jutsu but what about other strong female characters that are older like Chiyo and Tsume. It's like Sakura and Ino got stuck at 14 years old in a 50 year old body - that's sad.

I think your story deserves a few more chapters. I'm glad you put the story up and started messing with the ideas.

Just think about what you like about yourself that will only grow with time - those are the advantages of aging.

I hope I don't sound preachy but I thought your story was important.

it was good although i didnt quite catch the ending. was he dreaming cause he fell out of bed i thought they were on the floor? oh well other than that i enjoyed it good job on this