rate_review Reviews

i really like your story. i thought the plot would be cliche, but it is very well done. i also like how the characters are- they may not be exactly how they are in the anime/manga, but they are still believable. and then even while they're talking about incestual rape, you slip in these cute little things like naruto's lips being soft. i usually stop reading stories when there are rape scenes, but you kept it bearable so good job with that. i hope this story is your top priority! :)

What happened to this story? TT-TT It died~~ *sobs while begging for an update*

The plot is awesome! ^__^ Switching bodies seems to be quite an eye-opener in both of their cases... It'd be hard for them to hate each other after this. :P I can't wait to read more!

This is good update soon

aww, I'm sad that Itachi rapes Sasuke, but that's okay. I like this story, and so I'm excited about what will happen next!!

Oh my...I've seen the body switch fics before, but I haven't personally read one that I was happy with. This I am happy with. I'm still rolling it around in my head why. Perhaps it's partially because you take in the learned responses of the boys' bodies. I appreciated how Naruto noticed how tense Sasuke's body is, that Sasuke noticed how relaxed Naruto's is and that Sasuke can't control the vocal cues and facial expressions of Naruto's body like he can of his own. I also liked how detached the rape scene was. The way Naruto reacted--well, at first I wasn't sure I was okay with it, but I've been thinking about it, and, well, Naruto kind of reacted like he didn't believe it was happening and kind of like *it wasn't happening to his body* (which technically, it wasn't). The detachedness kind of works anyway. I do feel like some sort of after effect emotional rush is missing. I think Naruto should be reacting with a little more gusto and nervous energy than he has so far.

The intro of Gaara--Oh goodness that's complicated. I don't think I would try it just cuz' it adds so many factors. Does Gaara understand what they mean by switching bodies? Because Sasuke's voice would be saying what Naruto said and Sasuke's voice would be saying what Naruto said, would Gaara think that "Sasuke" (actually Naruto) was getting raped by "Naruto's" brother? (actually Sasuke, thus actually Itachi, but maybe Gaara would be thinking "I didn't know Naruto had a brother..."). Would Gaara be mad at "Sasuke" for taking off "Naruto's" shirt? And all of it ultimately brings up the question, how did the body swap happen in the first place?

Though...complicated or not, it does advance the plot and adds another element. I do really like this story. I encourage you to keep going with it. I'd love to see a body switch fic that actually works.

awesome story. i enjoy the blend of plot with humor. in this particular type of story it is very important the characters stay in character as much as they can, and you're doing just that, perfectly! ^^ interesting turn of events in the recent chapter. its nice that the plot could be so much deeper. again, great job. i can hardly wait for more. :-)

Pretty good so far... I'd like to see how it plays out...

oooooooooooooh! Please update, this sounds very interesting!! ^_^;

No suggestions from here XD. I like to let a story flow as the author sees fit, and yours is flowing nicely for a first chapter! Good writing, nice plot (XPP), all in all something I'll be checking for updates. Now I have a question... at the rate things are going, Kiba's gonna find out stuff soon, right? Cause there were a lot of hints ^_^. either that, or he'll start thinking Naruto and Sasuke are an item. *snort*