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June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!! i have to say i always enjoy body-switch stories, when they're well written which this one is. this is an AU correct? i havent seen any indications of ninjas and the cannon is a little skewed, but thats prefectly normal if it is an au. anyways, nicely written, well developed, good characterization.
and is that itachi i see there? i hope my favorite little sociopath does something horribly inappropriate to naruto-who-is-sasuke! teehee, btw, does sasuke have a special little naruto shrine in his closet or something? oooo, or maybe a shrine to itachi??!!??!?! teehee this is highly amusing, i hope we see more soon!
may your muses be kind and your updates be quick!!! ^.^
and is that itachi i see there? i hope my favorite little sociopath does something horribly inappropriate to naruto-who-is-sasuke! teehee, btw, does sasuke have a special little naruto shrine in his closet or something? oooo, or maybe a shrine to itachi??!!??!?! teehee this is highly amusing, i hope we see more soon!
may your muses be kind and your updates be quick!!! ^.^
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June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh gawd. Update, update.
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June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Here is some fuel: It's absolutely adorable, and I want more. If you do not intend to supply more...well, desperate measures will have to be taken. Jk, or...am I? Nice touch with the 'pink nipples', that was worthy of a good laugh and a big smile. Anyway, hope to see more soon.
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June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit, when Kiba burst out with "What the hell was that," I burst out laughing. Funniest damn thing I've read in a while.
ALthough, I admit this story puzzles me. Its AU, yet they switch bodies. Very strange. Good story though. I look forward to your next chapter. ^^
ALthough, I admit this story puzzles me. Its AU, yet they switch bodies. Very strange. Good story though. I look forward to your next chapter. ^^
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June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah. I just had ta review again just to say that this line: “Oh no, where have my manly brown nipples gone!” is just the funniest most random thing ever!
Its the kind of line you know you'd quote every second of the day, where this some body switching movie on the big screen. As an aspiring filmmaker, if I ever do some cheesy body switching comedy... can I steal that?? Its just so wrong on so many levels that its just so right.
Its the kind of line you know you'd quote every second of the day, where this some body switching movie on the big screen. As an aspiring filmmaker, if I ever do some cheesy body switching comedy... can I steal that?? Its just so wrong on so many levels that its just so right.
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June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omfg i'm freakin crackin' up! this is a great start, soooo many great parts in it already. naruto's discovery of cute, pink nipples instead of his "manly brown" ones.. and the "foreign penis" lmao! also, the lunch part with naruto forgetting he's "sasuke" and then he and sasuke both badmouthing "themselves" lmfao, greatness!!
i love in fics when they both start to learn what the other's life is REALLY like, and this is taking it to a whole other level, and i love it even more!! and judging from the sense of foreboding concerning sasuke not wanting naruto to go to his house, naruto not thinking about itachi, and the pairings listed, i can't WAIT to see what will happen next chapter as well!!
~ lg
i love in fics when they both start to learn what the other's life is REALLY like, and this is taking it to a whole other level, and i love it even more!! and judging from the sense of foreboding concerning sasuke not wanting naruto to go to his house, naruto not thinking about itachi, and the pairings listed, i can't WAIT to see what will happen next chapter as well!!
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June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So funny! I really like this. and I really love your pairings. There's Uchihacest and Ita/Naru and Sasu/Naru? Oh, I can't wait!!!
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June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good start. Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon.