rate_review Reviews

Pretty good, but SPELL CHECK!!! OMK! There were many errors, big one was your* and you have extra words in certain places that ruin the mood. It was good for a first or second try, but if you intend to keep writing, get yourself a beta.

All three notes in this story was incredibly funny. And yay for SasuNaru-action with light bondage! *smiles*

It was the 'troublesome' that gave them away, wasn't it? Squee.

cute and crazy i like it

mmm, that was a nice christmas-in-june present!! for some reason i always enjoy seasonal stories more off season. anyways, that was hot and adorable at the same time, and sasuke's letter back was hilarious, and cute too!

good show ^.^

what a coincidence! me and sasuke asked for the *same* thing. but damn. i didnt get me a blue eyed blonde. ha. i guess i was a bad girl that year. anywho, what a delightful story. teehee so cute. ^^ all dem charaters are in character. with nice touch o' humor and bucketful o' smut.
and gosh i saw sensitive pronograph just recently (too?) and i must concurr it was very o___0. but what i'd do to get rabbit like that. ::oogles::

haha nice

You know you're amongst my favourite writers right? And this story confirms it again. :) Very nice and hot. What can I say - my morning coffee just got a whole lotta better. A little tip - you might want to look at it again and correct a few (and very small) mispellings. Like And even though they’d found that Itachi was innocent and Sasuke didn’t have the sole responsibility of recreating the clan, wouldn’t Sasuke wan (want)to have kids of his own? Things like that. I noticed it in the last "letter" to the Santas as well.

But in all.... GREAT STORY! If I could fave this one - I would.

Wow.

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Some of THE hottest sex I've seen in a while...

The best part was, it's SO out of season XD!

What's your e-mail? I can't find it. It's hidden on the review you left me for "Exotic Love" and on your profile, so...? Becuase, I really wanna talk to you about some stuff relating to that fic. I'm still trying to sort out some stuff but two things I know for sure: 1) Naruto and Sasuke WILL dress up in Indian wedding outfits with Naruto in the sari. My friend gave me the awesome idea that it's becuase they were forced into lead roles for a play (I'm think classic Indian romance?) for a cultural function or something. and 2)They will take bhangra lessons with Gai and Lee as the father-son, overly enthusiastic, mind-numbingly wacko, green-loving teachers. That oughta be fun^^. So yes, I vant j00 E-Mail! RAWR!

~Lihrah

whew....*fans self*...that was nice and HOT for the start of muy day!! lvoed the idea, very cute! the ending was funny, lol XD i almost feel sorry for the santas hehe...almost.