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for Take my Hand

by SexyMomma

person Gemini
schedule May 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story is going rather well so far. However, I feel I should point out that team Gai -Neji, TenTen, and Lee- were all part of the mission to save Gaara fromt he Akatsuki. So Neji would already know that Gaara no longer housed a demon. Besides that small change, I like it. Keep up the good work!
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, and I hope you update soon. I would love to find out if Hinata has a boy or a girl, and the fact that you described everything is really good. So please update soon.
person Anon
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah...will you be udating this fic? I sure hope so. It is a very good fic. I want to know what happens? Come on...you can do it!!
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Actually, Naruto's father's name is Namikaze Minato and his mother's name is Uzumaki Kushina. If you go to Narutofan.com, they have free manga downloads, and I got the names from the latest Shippuden chapters ^^
person Anon
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gaara and Hinata make a great pair! I love this fic. Looking forward to the update!!! GREAT JOB!!
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thank you all very much for sticking by this story, even though I haven't been able to update as often as I would like to. If it weren't for all of you, I wouldn't be writing this story for my wonderful readers. Hope to see you all soon enough!
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There is such a tenderness in this story, those two seem to be so perfect for each other, they compliment each other in every way.

Thank you for writing them as not only characters, but as individuals.
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this and i think it is very sweet, please keep going. (LOVE THE LEMON)
person gaara89
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha the trouser snake! classic! nice job, i really like how this story is shaping up.
person Anon
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this pairing very much. (Neji and Hinata too...actually better but Gaara is so hot!!) Anyway, this is a very nice fic. I really enjoyed it. When is the next update coming? I know you are busy and all but have mercy!! Awesome fic. Keep up the good work!!!