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for March of the Fan Girls

by DevilnBlue

person Anon
schedule July 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lol, fear the fangirls. Naruto knows not what he's getting into.
And even if he did...he'd probably still get in trouble somehow.
Yay for silly
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hahaha... i laughed again at the antics of one uzumaki naruto!

i liked the part where he's in hinatas room! he does have one VERY obsested fan!

i kinda wonder what you have planned for him? hum? ^_~

laters! ~_^

miko
person Damp
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This had me laughing so hard...my dog's looking at me as if I've lost my mind or something. I really like this, I actually felt like I was there...well duh! You had it so that we (the readers) were actually there. Please update this as I, too, wish to see as to what goes on in the mind of a fan girl.

-Damp *I can't wait to see what Naruto discovers*
person meiko
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! It's so funny!! XD And Naruto you do have a fangirl! She's right here lol!!
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aaawww, cuuuute! a little less focused than i had imagined, and a little bit dragging through some of the weird perspective in the middle there, i think maybe you want to rethink your perspectiv voice a little, it would flow a lot more smoothly that way. i really liked the concept though, and what we saw was kinda funny, but promises utter crack to come!

may your muses be kind and your udates be fast! ^..^
person mary
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
naruto is gonna get his ass kicked and then some for being in sakuras room and hinatas! fan girls will eat him alive!
good plot line and so far, he is dead meat to the girls!
person emp78
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is hilarious! Please update soon.
person Anon
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT !!! I just loooooove this fanfic. It's just too funny. I wonder what will Naruto think of his one fan-girl. : )
person Lihrah
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Interesting idea. The no use of quotation marks was a little confusing at first, but I like it. It gives an individual air to the whole thing. Teehee, polka dot panty thief Naru-chan XP.

Keep writing!
~Lihrah