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July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just reread this for the first time in about a year. I keep hoping that you might have added to it. But thats ok. Sometimes creativity takes time. I'll just keep on waiting and hoping that some day you will spin your magic and this story will continue.
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April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woow i wish i found it sooner
this is so amazing, beautifully done
my goshh i don't know who should i pity more sasuke or naruto
can't wait for your update next
thanx
this is so amazing, beautifully done
my goshh i don't know who should i pity more sasuke or naruto
can't wait for your update next
thanx
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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh... Whats Naruto up to?
Update soon !
Update soon !
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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! Lol i waited several hours hoping to become your 100th reviewer!! Lol silly i know, but its your big 1 0 0!!!! Egads i'm so happy for you!! *Dances around you in circles* Lol okay okay down to serious business, before someone leaves a review while i'm going off at the mouth and snags that 100 spot from me!
I actually had to refresh myself with what happened in the last few chapters before i read your update, so i read i thiiink 20 - 22. I actually think i missed reading chp 21 when you'd first uploaded it, cuz i couldn't remember anything from it all!! Deidara!!! Why hadn't i put two and two together!! He's a freaking artist!! Why wouldn't he be Jane Doe!? But then again so was Sasori, i have no idea why i kept thinking it was Itachi that was Jane Doe, but that's silly, why would Itachi.. nevermind. lol I was pleasantly surprised with that revelation though.
I know i've probably said this several times over, but Itachi IS A COMPLETE DICK!!!! And not the nice kind that do pleasant things to cute bubble butts either!!! Lol wow, that was.. hahaha mental image xD Need to focus. But yes, complete dick, hate him, but oh so happy that he went off on that trip. I hope his plane crashes. I doubt it will (that would be too convenient [sp?], but i can still hope. That last scene with Naruto smashing his hand all up had me on edge tho. That was an incredibly Stupid thing to do. He’d made it through the whole horrible ordeal without showing Itachi how much he had gotten to him, and then wham! Punches a mirror, cuts up his hand, proving to Itachi (had he not gone on that trip and insisted both he and Sasuke be present to watch him complete the portrait) that something was going on. I don’t think he’d be able to explain a busted up hand, plus, it would probably be a bitch to try and paint with.
I love you so very very much! And its not only because you are a brilliant writer! I know you are going to busy with work and all, but I would not be a good friend or lover of fanfiction if I did not remember to pester you about updating your lovelies! So Here it is woman! I want to read More! So much more! More until this fic is complete and you decide to do a sequel or start on a new piece! You mentioned before the chp that you decided to change the plot for the second half of the fic and I am down with that. Not because the first half of the plot was lacking in any way, but because from the very beginning I’ve been ready and willing to read everything you’ve put up. This fic is Your baby, You are the author, so whatever you decide as the Author to give to Us the Readers we should be more then happy to take, love, coddle, and feed sweet treats when your back is turned. As I said earlier, you are brilliant, and I love reading your work, and I am rooting for our boys to pull through this (I’m also silently praying that Sasuke doesn’t do anything stupid and/or unnecessary in his attempts to protect Naruto) lol but whatever you’ve got planned I’m looking forward to it.
Love Always and Forever, Me! =D Lol imma go bug you on MSN cuz I see you are online *evil chuckle*
I actually had to refresh myself with what happened in the last few chapters before i read your update, so i read i thiiink 20 - 22. I actually think i missed reading chp 21 when you'd first uploaded it, cuz i couldn't remember anything from it all!! Deidara!!! Why hadn't i put two and two together!! He's a freaking artist!! Why wouldn't he be Jane Doe!? But then again so was Sasori, i have no idea why i kept thinking it was Itachi that was Jane Doe, but that's silly, why would Itachi.. nevermind. lol I was pleasantly surprised with that revelation though.
I know i've probably said this several times over, but Itachi IS A COMPLETE DICK!!!! And not the nice kind that do pleasant things to cute bubble butts either!!! Lol wow, that was.. hahaha mental image xD Need to focus. But yes, complete dick, hate him, but oh so happy that he went off on that trip. I hope his plane crashes. I doubt it will (that would be too convenient [sp?], but i can still hope. That last scene with Naruto smashing his hand all up had me on edge tho. That was an incredibly Stupid thing to do. He’d made it through the whole horrible ordeal without showing Itachi how much he had gotten to him, and then wham! Punches a mirror, cuts up his hand, proving to Itachi (had he not gone on that trip and insisted both he and Sasuke be present to watch him complete the portrait) that something was going on. I don’t think he’d be able to explain a busted up hand, plus, it would probably be a bitch to try and paint with.
I love you so very very much! And its not only because you are a brilliant writer! I know you are going to busy with work and all, but I would not be a good friend or lover of fanfiction if I did not remember to pester you about updating your lovelies! So Here it is woman! I want to read More! So much more! More until this fic is complete and you decide to do a sequel or start on a new piece! You mentioned before the chp that you decided to change the plot for the second half of the fic and I am down with that. Not because the first half of the plot was lacking in any way, but because from the very beginning I’ve been ready and willing to read everything you’ve put up. This fic is Your baby, You are the author, so whatever you decide as the Author to give to Us the Readers we should be more then happy to take, love, coddle, and feed sweet treats when your back is turned. As I said earlier, you are brilliant, and I love reading your work, and I am rooting for our boys to pull through this (I’m also silently praying that Sasuke doesn’t do anything stupid and/or unnecessary in his attempts to protect Naruto) lol but whatever you’ve got planned I’m looking forward to it.
Love Always and Forever, Me! =D Lol imma go bug you on MSN cuz I see you are online *evil chuckle*
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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you updated I love this story and I can't wait to see what happens next
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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!! I am so into this! I just found Your story And read it non-stop Ch. 1-22 I'm so glad Itachi is gone for 2 weeks, now if only someone could run over Kisame, throw the car in reverse and run him over again, that would make things easier for Sasuke too! Can't wait for the next update! *HUGS-KISSES*
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, MY GOD. Is it? Can it really be? Yes, an update! And, after so long. I was content weith what I had, had to be really, and then here you show up again and I am as intrigued as ever. Of course, the style is the same and even though the writing seems a bit rushed and has a few mistakes, I love it. I want to know what the new plot twist is. I can't wait. Will Itachi finally get his smug, sadistic, twisted ass handed to him? Are we going to learn more about Naruto's past and see more of that fractured side you've written so well? I mean, there's a definite insight into his head and his blatant illness and I enjoy every minute of the parallels between that and Sasuke's plight. Well done. Keep it coming!
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update! *dances*
I really love this story. I hope the plot change works out for you! This chapter was well-written.
Keep going!
I really love this story. I hope the plot change works out for you! This chapter was well-written.
Keep going!
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello. I finished what is posted of this story a while ago and was just checking for an update. I'm sad to think it won't be continued. The characterization of Sasuke and Naruto are different, dark and deep. I loved the darker twist to an obssessed and mentally unstable Naruto. I would have liked to have read more on his past issues and definitely wouldn't mind seeing more of the growth between Naruto and Sasuke's relationship in this fic. The twists with the art, both Naruto's only piece and his job at the gallery as well as Sasuke's paintings are lovely. I'm sincerely hoping that it will be continued, but not holding my breath aas there hasn't been an update in so long. Though, I'll still read what's here from time to time, as the writing and descriptiveness are unique.