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July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kisses are awesome so keep them coming! Darn you!! You choked me up a bit with the bathroom scene =( But it was masterfully written. I really really love ur fic, keep up the fantabulous work =) Your readers Love YOU!!!! *glomp*
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July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read thr Ch 11 last night and when I tried to leave a review, it was the download time. So I thought I better do it before I read more. I recall loving this story quite a bit. It was well written. I love how you handle Sasuke in particular, and the rivalry thing b/w him and Naruto, and the secret admiration, and of courst the Ita/Sasu was a very nice touch. I actually love ItaSasu. I always like Itachi loving or lusting Sasuke, even to the extent that he would claim him as his own. Let me read more now. ^ ^
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! keep it coming! : D
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Naruto Show of! Never. Anyway I'm sure he would have gotten better timing if he didn't mess up. Heh. Keep writing I cant wait to see what happens next
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD the text looked a little messed up but other than that loved the story! XD
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It really starting to get GOOD!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story please keep going!
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And the intrigue continues. Of course Kisame, would like Itachi. Even in the nime, he's a little to polite and "Itachi's the boss." Makes a person wonder. I'm glad that you didn't get rid of Kisame's ruthless asshole nature.
One sentence stood out to me as needing a fix: "Neji resigned back into his relaxed position, not amused with Naruto’s antiques." The spelling is "antics" and it just threw me off while I was reading. Had to go back and reread it to make sure I understood it.
This is just getting better. Deidara gives Sasuke as much freedom as possible, and Sasuke's all "It's a COINDENCE. The fact that I came hoping to see him means NOTHING." *snort* It's a good bit of light ironic humor mixed in when everything is so obviously getting heated up. I'm glad Naruto finally admitted that he has feelings for Sasuke so that Neji can get over him and move on.
The next chapter is going to be so much fun. ^_^
One sentence stood out to me as needing a fix: "Neji resigned back into his relaxed position, not amused with Naruto’s antiques." The spelling is "antics" and it just threw me off while I was reading. Had to go back and reread it to make sure I understood it.
This is just getting better. Deidara gives Sasuke as much freedom as possible, and Sasuke's all "It's a COINDENCE. The fact that I came hoping to see him means NOTHING." *snort* It's a good bit of light ironic humor mixed in when everything is so obviously getting heated up. I'm glad Naruto finally admitted that he has feelings for Sasuke so that Neji can get over him and move on.
The next chapter is going to be so much fun. ^_^
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A new update!
You're leaving us on a cliffhanger here! I am secretly hoping Naruto gets the msg from Sasuke in time, but then again, I also want to see what would happen if Naruto approaches Sasuke during the race~
You're leaving us on a cliffhanger here! I am secretly hoping Naruto gets the msg from Sasuke in time, but then again, I also want to see what would happen if Naruto approaches Sasuke during the race~