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wow that was bloody brilliant. The image of Naruto's mother dying... the way he planned the gallery for Neiji's party... what drives Sasuke's to be such a cold hearted bastard is well planned out by you. Your story is amazing and well thought out. You have a way with words that allows someone to instantly picture it. And I feel sorry for Neiji that he can't have Naruto-kun. It's like this wierd Romeo and Juliet story except there is only one real obstacle, Itachi. I hope the muses always stay with you and I get to see your work again soon.

Itachi is one possessive and psychotic SOB. Poor Sasuke-kun...

Now I'm dying for Naruto to figure everything out and save Sasuke (without getting himself killed in the process) but at the same time, I don't want everything to end so easily. This story is so great. Lots of plotting and subplotting, and Sasuke-abuse (which every Sasuke fic should has in liberal doses).

Can't wait for the next chapter. You've got me on the edge of my seat. ^_^

*sniffles* Poor Sasuke =( Stupid Itachi! >_< *rubs eyes* What's going to happen to our couple that has yet to be? =(

what's the matter with that psycho Itachi?!!! If he's already this mad when he sees Naruto and Sasuke in the same room, what would he do when he finds out Naruto and Sasuke are going to coincidentally racing together on Wed?
Poor Sasuke...I'm sure alittle blond love would make him feel better.

Another great chapter!
I keep wondering who exactly is Jane Doe...maybe something we all know?
Come on give us a hint!

I like that you gave Sasuke a unique hobby like racing, although do be careful to not have too may "coincidences" about how Sasuke and naruto continue to bump into each other. Some might see it as Fate, others might see it as cliché.

Oh my... now I feel bad for both Sasuke and Naruto, and thent o find out that the only reason why Sasuke was sent to Germany was because of Itachi... I like how that works. It makes me wonder if Itachi had anything to do with their parents deaths because he wanted Sasuke back. Wouldn't be surprised, because your Itachi is twisted.

Not sure how I feel about Deidara. He "helps" Sasuke, but at the same time, he throws him to the wolves within the same breath. Although I know Sasuke is grateful for his intervention. Will the fortuitous coincidence at the race track lead to Naruto and Sasuke finally bridging th gap between them...? I can't wait to find out. ^_^

this is one of the best stories i have ever read. you capture emotions soo...vividly, and wow!...

please continue writing.

I don't care about Sasuke make Naruto fall in love with Neji for the love of god!

wow, im loving this story! keep writing, the emotions are great, and the ---well the whole thing is good! i really dont know why you dont have more reviews. i cant wait for the next chapter!

Poor Neji. Yeah I could see "Troublesome" coming out of Shika's mouth so many times you'd think he was a parrot. No one wants to hear the "I told you so"s.

It seems that Naruto has finally realized that he's in love with Sasukeand has Neji to pick up the pieces...but Sasuke only has a crazy, sex fiend brother. Let's just hope these boys can "kiss and make up" soon.