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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say that I really like this story! It's very well written, the flow is fantastic and the characters are very well done. Can't wait to see how those two are going to resolve their issues!!
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I can't believe Sasuke is such a jerk! he is such a meanie, but I still want Naruto to be with him!
I think they would look so good together~
"mental image..."
I think they would look so good together~
"mental image..."
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story a lot. It has sex, drama, angst, romance, and hidden agendas floating all over the place.
The art angle hasn't been done in this very interesting way before. I also love the ItaSasu moments because Itachi's just that twisted. It seems like he loves trying to maintain control over Sasuke's life no matter what.
This last chapter was great, even down to the obvious differencesin Naruto and Sasuke's actions. Naruto insulted Sasuke (as a joke) and Sasuke forgave him, but then Sasuke does the same thing an Naruto flies off the handle. With the context of both men's lives, to me, both insults seemed equally damaging, but Naruto has always been the one to be more vocally and physically volatile when upset/angered, which makes sense that he would take the joke more personally.
Sorry for the psychoanalysis, but I just thought that scene was done really well. Hopefully, Naruto will forgive Sasuke and things can progress. I wonder what Itachi will have to say about it. This story is great, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
The art angle hasn't been done in this very interesting way before. I also love the ItaSasu moments because Itachi's just that twisted. It seems like he loves trying to maintain control over Sasuke's life no matter what.
This last chapter was great, even down to the obvious differencesin Naruto and Sasuke's actions. Naruto insulted Sasuke (as a joke) and Sasuke forgave him, but then Sasuke does the same thing an Naruto flies off the handle. With the context of both men's lives, to me, both insults seemed equally damaging, but Naruto has always been the one to be more vocally and physically volatile when upset/angered, which makes sense that he would take the joke more personally.
Sorry for the psychoanalysis, but I just thought that scene was done really well. Hopefully, Naruto will forgive Sasuke and things can progress. I wonder what Itachi will have to say about it. This story is great, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying this fic. I love the descriptions of the artwork and how they relate to the characters true feelings. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!!!!!! When are Naruto and Sasuke going to realize that they have a thing for each other and what the deal with Itachi? I can’t wait to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON.
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How come you have only three reviews?!! It's an awesome story, at least I like it. I guess people are just lazy. Anyway, I totally loved the narrative of the art gallery's decoration. It was really good, I could visualize it to the last detail and it sounded wonderful. You have great taste and imagination. I especially liked the idea of the water channel and the candles.
Since the last chapter I have been meaning to ask you – is there any chance of Itachi/Naruto/Sasuke in the story? I don't mind either way cuz I am fond of both of the pairings you have! Update soon cuz I really like the story and looking forward for more!
Since the last chapter I have been meaning to ask you – is there any chance of Itachi/Naruto/Sasuke in the story? I don't mind either way cuz I am fond of both of the pairings you have! Update soon cuz I really like the story and looking forward for more!
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June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! POOR SASUKE!!!!!!!!!!!I can’t wait to read the next chapter so and UPDATE SOON..............
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hiyas!!!
I really like how this story is developing. The way you describe the paintings makes me feel like I'm actually looking at them.
I'm very curious about that artist, "Jane Doe". I hope we can see more of this character's art. ^___^
And I'd really like to see more of Itachi's point of view regarding his actions with Sasuje.
Can't wait to see next chapter.
Hope see you soon
Ja nE!!
I really like how this story is developing. The way you describe the paintings makes me feel like I'm actually looking at them.
I'm very curious about that artist, "Jane Doe". I hope we can see more of this character's art. ^___^
And I'd really like to see more of Itachi's point of view regarding his actions with Sasuje.
Can't wait to see next chapter.
Hope see you soon
Ja nE!!