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I really wish that Sasuke would die already.

Ahahahaha. I _love_ the Neji and Tenten action here. It's so amusing because it's SO plausible. Plus Tenten's rather clever for that plan...Lee too. Seems Neji isn't as good as reading his teammates as he thinks he is, if they can pull the wool over his eyes. And I lvoe the idea of Sasuke working with Lee and Gai!

I like the NaruSaku too, but honestly at this point I am on the edge of my seat waiting to see what Neji will do.

Well, I have to say, the story is starting to move along! Yay! Sorry I haven't review in a while, been kind of busy....
As for the NejiTen, I wonder what Neji's going to do? lol! I can't wait for the next chapter! Also, don't forget to add a little bit more NaruSaku then NejiTen, even if it's just a smidge.

Yes a new chapter and it was a very good one. I hope that you make Sasuke's end a painful one for being so full of himself he is so easy to hate in this story. Not going to update until next weekend is no problem because you will be back and the wait will make the chapter even better.

An amazing story! So much flip flopping emotions in this one! A serious rollercoaster. Now mind you, this is a review up to this point in the story. I have to be honest, you had me worried a bit there about this being Naruto/Sakura, but proved me wrong! I love how you've written in three of my favorite couples! I love the Hina/Kiba pairing, and how you've written them. I think you've done very very well writing Kiba. Hinata, not bad, as she's older you've added some that inner strength we see in her. Neji guarding her, very fitting and I loved their interactions. Kakashi's redemtion, a side plot, but you did very well on it. It added to the story, and parrelled it somewhat with Team 7. The Neji TenTen is heating up, and seems to be heading in a good direction. Sasuke as an ass, an arggonte ass, yep thats how I think he'd turn up. I hope he finds resistance to stirring up to much trouble, lets hope so. You've crafted the Naruto/Sakura relationship very well here. Had me guessing a few times, a few false starts, but in the end it looks to be going strong. BTW, Gaara as a badass, always good. I love how you've written the rookie 9 all cheering on Naruto and Sakura. I also enjoyed the reaction Sasuke got to them. Really not one of them would have a reason to trust him, let alone like him. I think that the reactions that your are writing to them interacting with him are very legitimate. I can wait to see more of this! Great great job!

Ya know, I really, REALLY want to throttle Sasuke! I really think that boy has some serious mental problems! *fumes for a few moments and then calms down* That was a great chapter and I especially loved when Naruto said Neji had finally come out of the closet. That was great! Keep up the wonderful work!

Ezzy

I adore your story, and have been following it closely, but you goofed in chapter 16. *Tsunade* is the Fifth Hokage, as Wikipedia says here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Naruto , and here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tsunade_(Naruto) .

The Third ('Sandaime' in Japanese) is the old man, The fourth (Yondaime) is Naruto's father, and Tsunade is the Godaime (fifth). Godaime is also used in the show to refer to Gaara as the Godaime Kazekage: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gaara.

Should be an easy edit tho. =) Keep up the good work!

That was really good. Just to let you know, Naruto's dad was the Fourth Hokage. I can't wait to see what Sasuke's creepy plan is. And I so can't wait for the long awaited lemon. Keep updating.
Rox

OMG! You are goddess of this site meaning you own writers here totally. Yet another excellent chapter in storytelling. And about time Naruto got to it! Man, if he had confessed sooner, he could have avoided a few problems. Not Sasuke, there is no avoiding Sasuke, but I figure Naruto will be more then up to the task of handing him his ass. Good Job! I shall patiently [I'm lying, I'll be fiending like a crack whore] for the next chapter. [SmutInTheNextChapterOMGYAY!] Kenya

This is just too good!!! I keep looking for your updates every other day (kindly giving you a day to update, how generous of me right?)just to make sure I read it as soon as it is out. Keep up the good work!!!!