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for A Soul's Salvation

by KogasAngel

person zeroharm
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Once again, an emotional roller coaster; Every time we see them making progress it gets just a little more difficult, but you also get a real feeling that they are on their way. Looking forward to your next update... definitely still the number one WAFF fiction on aff.
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have but one problem with this... and that is that I have to wait for the Sasuke murder (please, kill him in the slowest, most humiliating and painful way. The asshole needs to DIE!) and the love scene between Naruto & Sakura. Other than that, I absolutely LOVE this fic!!!
person ninjakitty
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
fantastic
person Leowen
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are cruel. I get yelled at for the emotional roller coaster I put people through in my fic but seriously...that shower scene? Too cruel. Nonetheless it's only getting better, despite my occasional "...OH COME ON!"'s. I practically spazzed out when I saw that lovely Chapter 15 on the drop down menu as I obsessively check for updates every day. I definitely could see Naruto losing his cool like that and saying something horrible before realizing it, but of course you already know that. I do hope that that incident doesn't cause too much trouble in the relationship but from the sounds of it it wont be TOO much a problem. Nonetheless I loved the chapter and I'm already eagerly waiting for the next to come out, hopefully it won't take too long. (Though I definitely understand what it's like to have very little time to write with a busy schedule, so take your time and don't rush it if you're busy!)
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so finally caught up with story but that happens when you spend a month in the hospital. Well anyways I have to say that this story is just awesome. I am enjoying the fact that you are making realize that it was their mistakes that kept apart and that they will have to work them out before they can truly be happy. I loved the part where Hinata cussed and everyone was shocked. I did the same thing once in school and everyone around me was shocked I guess its because I was the quiet one like Hinata is and no one would expect that from a quiet person. I like how you have Gaara supporting the relationship btwn. Naruto and Sakura. I also like how everyone from the village is standing behind Naruto and Sakura. Having you write that makes me believe that it is their way of making it up to him for being jerks to him while he was growing up. There were only two mistakes that I saw and that was that you mispelled fourth and Jiraiya other that it was a great chapter. I hope that you update soon and I hope to see an update on your Inuyasha stories. It's great that you are updating on your stories.
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn Kankuro and that evil ass Sasuke! I don't know who I want to die more, Kankuro for ruining the porn or Sasuke for being an expert manipulator/asshole. Either one would get my vote. Well girlfriend, this was a chapter worth waiting on and believe me, I have seriously been waiting on it. It had all the things a girl [if you can call 33 girlish] could want, romance, hints of smex, drama, plot and more plot. This isn't just random dribble. This is expert storytelling and you are indeed a pro. I can't wait to see more from you. This is easily my favorite story and I shall wait with baited breath for the next installment. ~Kenya
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've been anxiously waiting for this chapter. I don't know if I could've handled waiting another week for this one. Just impatient I suppose. Really love this story and this was a great chapter. Love the closeness Naruto and Sakura shared and I liked that you made their relationship realistic in that there are still insecurities at least on Sakura's part. As agonizing it is to read about their setbacks they are great elements that you have added to your story showing that thier relationship is still in the early stages and hopefully grows into something strong and solid. All this week I've been checking for an update just shows how into this story I am. This is by far one of my most favorite Naruto stories I have read. Now, I guess I just have wait for the next chapter. Hopefully you can surprise us with back to back chapters,lol! Either case I look foward to the next installment. Thanks again for this story.

K4L
person roxnroll
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Rox
person andrew
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn dude this is awsome. finally naruto sasuke confrontation. please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, let there be a big, hugemungus, fight, with no outside interferance. please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, finish the story
person Andrew
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, for the love of what ever god you believe in finish this stoy. it is very powerful, heart wrenching, and so very beuteful, well i can't spell it right, but you get it. but please, please, please, finish throughout the story, i was on the verge of tears and cried like twice, thank you for writing it