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for A Soul's Salvation

by KogasAngel

schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, you've got Sakura obsessing so much over how she treated Naruto in the past, I really thought you would have her blowing it big time in this chapter. It was great!! And, the way you are writing Naruto's characte...I just love how calm he is now. It's so sexy!..Keep it up. Can't wait for the next chappy :)
person zeroharm
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent chapter as always... few authors are as good as you at making you feel for the couple. No matter how many updates we get into this, it still feels like a mini-Christmas morning every time I tear into a new one, but that just means your doing a damn good job :-)
person DRACUS
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
KEEP GOING IT IS GETTING EVEN MORE INTERESTING BY THE DAY CONTINUE PLEASE, TRY TYPING TW0 CHAPTERS ON THE SAME DAY PLEASE.
person Kipling
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I found your Kagome/Koga stories first, and was so happy to see you in the Naruto section. I love the obstacles Sakura has to go over; I love Naruto's being so determined to win her; and I especially loved the part where their friends plot to get them together! The part about Neji's shooting Tenten "you're dinner!" look made me grin so wide, especially when Shikamaru followed it up with his own sexy come-hither maneuver. XD

I can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_O WOW, Naruto's inner demon being a bit protective their... ^_^ I LUV IT!! Still can't wait till when Naruto has to sleep in the same bed w/ Sakura!!!! TeHe! And I already understood Gaara's offer was just friendly, But now I wonder who could you possibly pair him up with.? I'm gonna still be checking for your post everyday!! But of course don't rush yourself! HUGS!!
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, that normally I hate Hinata, she's just too shy, but in this I LOVE her! She can actually speak for herself and and cruse, which I have to say is one of the funniest things I've ever read! I'm glad that the NaruSaku is starting to flow now, and that the Kyuubi's getting possive, but I like how Tsunade reacted to hearing that Sakura was looking at Naruto the whole time! I have to say this is one of the more intricately woven NaruSaku plots, and probably one of the best!
person chris
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I AM HOPELESSLY ADDICITED
person wickedone43
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome fic! Finally Naruto is getting some love. The plot is actually very interesting!!! So when is the next chapter coming up?
GREAT JOB!!
person roxnroll
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic. I can't wait to read the update.
Rox
person Oi_Ginger
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for another great chapter! Your fic is what keeps me coming back to this site. :^)