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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am thoroughly enjoying your story. As far as your rant. I understand Gaara's position. For the most part, the way you portray the characters is believable. I am really enjoying the plot you've created and can't wait to read what else you have planned. As far as Sasuke's character, obviously it really hard to tell who is now from the canon and anything derived from it is purely speculation, personally I don't like Sasuke and am enjoying reading him getting shot down. I actually only joined this site so I could leave this review. I'm glad I found this story on FF.net and on here. Again, I appreciate your story and look foward to the next chapter and thanks for updating twice this week!
K4L
K4L
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! New chapters! That part with Gaara was good, and with Neji, Kiba and Shikamaru as well! And the NaruSaku relationship is starting to move along! Even better! I can't wait for the next update!
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter....sorry if I struck a nerve......anyways I really liked Naruto in this chapter, amazing detail on his personality. Sasuke really needs to get his face punched in ...damn bastard.
update soon. the length is good so don't worry about it.
update soon. the length is good so don't worry about it.
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really great chapter..
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter...update soon please
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant chap
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you surely amazing, can't wait for your next chapter
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE, IT IS JUST GETTING VERY VERY VERY GOOD.
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September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh Angel, thank you for the crack that I soooo longed for. That chapter was great and the title was perfect. I liked how you had the whole forgiveness theme in it. The Gaara and Sakura scene was serene and well written. I also like how you had Kiba tell Naruto about how Sakura felt. The pacing is excellent. Oh, and the Sasuke bashing is well placed and deserved as usual. Keep up the excellent work.