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July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This one is definitely on my reading list!! It's awesome, and I love the angst! But, I hope Naruto and sakura get together soon!
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehehehe...gaara has a crush on sakura how cute but alas this is a naru/saku.....was that lord suppose to be lord seshomaru and his gaurds sango and miroku...well this chapter was fun...keep up the good work update soon
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I type this review without any regret about what I'm going to say. out of every story I've read on this site this is by far not only the best in the section, but the entire site. That's because this is the best written story I've read. You have a real art with your writing. Here's what mean, I like stories that have a good storyline to go with you know, the obvious. somethings that builds on an already great storyline and make it better. Some stories build up on to much storyline and just make it boring. Some just have no story and just get it over with. But you make it interesting you just build until it just get's tenser until all these emotions would come out at once. Sorry to make this long I'll just quick examples and then you can get on with your LIFE, I like to ramble. You make this story sadder and darker and still make the characters behave in the way that I belive they would in these situations. This story focuses on redemption, forgiveness and findings one's true love you make it enjoyable with the twists and turns. I just hope Naruto and Sakura can be together. Thank You for this great story (incidently I loved this story so much that it made me want to review I only signed up a few minutes ago before now I didn't see a reason)
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ZOMGahd!!! This will be a crossover won't it? I recognize that womanizing monk anywhere! This chapter was amazing! please keep it up.
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor naruto.....update soon, this has to be one of the best Naru/saku fic in this site
congrats.
congrats.
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July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YOu're just not making this easy for Sakura or Naruto, are you? At this rate, I don't know... Oh well! I wonder what Naruto's going to do, or how Hinata's going to get Sakura alone in the same room with Naruto... Update soon!
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July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're just not giving Naruto and Sakura a break are you, and now the the complication arising with this new lord and sakura. Poor Naruto, he had to stand there and watch, while Sasuke watched with a gleam in his eye, and the lord using his looks and power on Sakura. Update soon.
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July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another great chap, update soon.
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July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. Man Sakura just has the pick of the hot guys ! Can't wait til the next chapter.
Rox
Rox
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July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a pretty good chapter and in my opinion yo should kill Sasuke off who cares if he is the last of his clan I say let his clan die ad well I am not really fond of Naruto/Sakura pairring but I do like this story and I hope Naruto gets her and plus killing Sasuke is just a plus in my book lol anyways please update soon