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for A Soul's Salvation

by KogasAngel

schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Atta-boy naruto, amazing chapter again loving the story so far.
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still loving it so far, but I get the sense that hinata is blaming naruto for this or something like that. Oh well. Great
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I hope naruto doesn't get hurt in all this, if Uchiha wants sakura again......hoping for no fan sakura to be back. cool chapter. UPDATE PLEASE
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit that I found myself getting choked up over what Sakura was facing, but I'm definitely loving her character. I also love the fact that Hinata is giving her that shoulder she needs to cry on. I think Hina-chan is the best person for the job.

I love how the characters are turning out. I felt bad for Kakashi too *cough*becauseIlovehim*cough* but reading this, I do see what is being pointed out in this fic. He didn't pay attention to Sakura during training much at all. The scene between her new sensei and Kakashi in front of some of the villagers was intense to say the least, but still great. I can't wait to see what his reaction will be once he receives Obito's message.

All the characterizations have been great, but then again, its nothing new from you!

Amazing job!

Ezzy
Ps: I can already tell that like with the Inuyasha fandom, I will be quite addicted to your Naruto fics. Sakura is a wonderful character that doesn't get enough credit. *wanders off to read A Gift from the Past again since its one of her favorites*
person murdoc
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice Start
person murdoc
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice Chapter

She deserved it
person murdoc
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The only thing I didn't like about this chapter was that Hinata kept talking about Naruto like he was making mistakes with the way he was treating Sakura

I hope that you explain later what Sakura's feelings toward Sasuke are, Sakura never said anything about not having any more romantic feelings for him, the only thing she said was that she made mistakes because she was always after him, and because you haven't said anything else about it it looks to me like she only gave up on him because he's with Ino now, even Naruto thinks that she only apologized to him because she needs someone else now that Sasuke is taken

NaruSaku 4ever
person murdoc
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cool Chapter, I'll be waiting for the next one

How old are Naruto and Sakura in this fic?
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How do you do it? I was only going to check this story out and here I am hooked just like I am on the rest of your stories. I really like how you have made Sakura realize that always hitting Naruto has consequences. I mean eventually they will get tired of being a punching bag and leave. I like how you made Naruto so much mature than he is in other fics. I like this side to him. Well great story I hope that you update soon
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a really good story...is the village leader that wants to meet sakura at the gala interested in her more than politically...it would be fuuny to see a jealous naruto an sasuke...well keep up the good work update soon