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for A Soul's Salvation

by KogasAngel

schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's almost over? *wildfangirlscreaming* No! You're breaking my heart here! Still, I understand that all good things must come to an end and shall let 1000 Words soothing my pains. :P
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 20, good chapter, very strong end, can't wait for the epolige. please don't put in a church, thats what catholics do. they should be married in the cherry tree groves or in front of the three stumps where they frist worked together, or infront of the ramen shack (joke). but, this was a good end. try and make a sequal about theri kids and their crazy shananagins. well don't want to drag this too long. bye
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. One thing. You had Tsunade call Naruto her predecesor (sp)the word you want is succesor. The form you used means to come before not after.
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dude this is one of the best naruto stories i have ever read please tell me there is more to come cause it would be a shame to leave it there
person Anon
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes!! Finally, Naruto gets credit for doing his best to protect the village!!! Okay, a little too dramatic on my part, but this fic was awesome!!! This isn't the end right?
person Keihkono
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I have been following this story since it's first chapter and I really enjoy it. I even made an account just to review it. At first I read it because I am a huge NaruSaku fan and was just finding a good read. I accomplished that goal when I found this story and the whole plot, story, and twists that come with it are amazing. It even has all my favorite pairings, Kiba and Hinata always do look cute with eachother.

Also, I wanna thank you, because I've been having tough times in life for years, so now this story has not only kept me occupied, but it also has become an inspirational story to my life. Even if I know I can never be a ninja in real life, it's the concept. Giving Sakura a second chance to makes things better has inspired me to do the same. It may sound stupid but it's true. In a way, you've become my Obito by writing this story, and it has changed my ways and I am slowly working my problems because of it. I thank you so much, you're a life changer too.

Anyways, the way the whole story is written is amazing, and I enjoyed this chapter that just came out. Sasuke's a prick, and I'm glad now the whole village sees Naruto the way he should be seen. I can't wait for the update, and keep on writing X3
person Darkened.Naruto
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey great story. I like the change of orders for the Suna mission. And Sasuke is nothing more than a spoiled lil brat who thinks he is better than any and everybody. Which is full of shit. Worst than any rogue ninja's that are in Naruto... Please update and keep on writing stories...
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter... Everytime that bastard Sasuke opens his mouth he puts his foot in it... Eagerly anticipating the end and the epilogue...
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HA!!! TSUNADE AND JIRAIYA PUT THEM ALL IN THEIR PLACES! Oh wow, I wish my chapters came out this good! To think, you didn't like this chapter. Sakura was awesome and Sasuke absolutely disgusted me. I feel so bad for Naruto and his pictures...I wish there was like a paper jutsu someone could use to fix them...

Well, wonderful chapter and I look forward to more when its posted!

Ezzy
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was AMAZING!