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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the way yoiu ended ch 15 with naruto's english catch phras was a very smart touch
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lost track of this story for the longest time but I'm glad I found it again. Incredibly emotional and I enjoy the way Sasuke is the protagonist without any severe extremes to make him more hated. You keep him rather in character with flaws that are very human. He may even have some decency hidden under all the selfishness but chooses to ignore it. Hell, he could wake up some day. At least, that's the feel I get from your writing and that makes it good for me.
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is by far one of the best fan fictions i have ever read in my life. it is the perfect blance of humor, love, and pain in an angsty, tragic love story. though i don't hate sauske the character, i love to hate the personality you have given him, jelouse (can't spell), cruel, an asshole. i know it will end soon, but it still an amazing piece of work. it would make great movie or manga. let it end in a bang, and avoid a huge cliche, like sauske learning a lesson. it would be good, but to lame. kick his ass yeah. you have done very well for you first work, and i hope you contine to write. i would like to read more stories
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sorry you did have other works, i will finds and enjoy them. bye
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. this story has been one incredible ride. i am sorry to hear it is coming to an end. but if it must be, oh well. this is one great fic, and you should be very proud of this work.
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Totally cool!! Go Naruto! I am glad you didn't make him out to look ah..."slow"; "dense" (okay maybe just a tad); "stupid". He and Sakura make a good couple. I like this fic. Keep up the good work! Oh and can you hurry with the next chappy???? PLEASE!!!!
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn... fantastic chapter as always. I always hate this part of a fiction as I know it is coming to a close, but I still can't wait for each new chapter. I look forward to seeing how you handle the confrontation and hope for more waffy goodness after its over. Also, the scene with Kakashi and Sasuke is the best Kakashi moment I have seen in a long time :-)
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES!
Uchiha gets whats coming to him! FINALLY: a fanfic that knocks that stupid little prick off his pedistal@!!! Huzzah!!!!
I can't wait for chapter 19., >:D
Uchiha gets whats coming to him! FINALLY: a fanfic that knocks that stupid little prick off his pedistal@!!! Huzzah!!!!
I can't wait for chapter 19., >:D
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, You better come out with the next chapter i think im dieing inside.
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very it's saddening that it's coming to an end. But the best NaruSaku fic in this site.