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for A Soul's Salvation

by KogasAngel

schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just loved the new chapter. I wanted to strangle Sasuke because he is such a jerk and just doesn't get it. I like how you had your explaination as to why Itachi killed the Uchiha clan and I liked how you had Kakashi dress down Sasuke even though in my opinion he deserved a swift kick to the balls for his cruel remarks about Naruto. Someone that has always been there for him. Update soon and I hope that Sakura does meet up with him and kicks the shit out of him. Great work.
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hell yeah!! That was a great chapter and I can't wait to see what Sakura does! How dare Sasuke do that to Naru! *wants to get violent with duck-butt head sasuke* Kakashi's dialogue was extremely well written and I'm glad that he's finally talking about it.

Thanks so much for the update!! Can't wait for more :-D

Ezzy
person roxnroll
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so good. I don't usually enjoy Naru/Saku fics, but I have really enjoyed this one. After all they've been through, I can't believe Sasuke would do that. That was written so well. Keep up the great work.
Rox
person Mike
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the chapter and look forward to the next one. Great Job
person Felicia
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVE THIS!!! Really cant offer any advice cause it looks like you got it covered. I cant wait for the next chapter.
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE. Neji better be ready to kiss ass. Teme needs to get his head out of his ass. Naruto is AWESOME!
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Neji, better, have, a, great, FUCKING, SPEECH PREPARED! Or like Kiba said, bye bye balls....... lol! Great chapter!
person Shintenshin no Jutsu
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliantly written, I absolutely adore this story. I'm glad to see that you leave Sakura with no doubt about where her heart lies, because it makes me annoyed when authors have her angsting over Sasuke every twenty seconds. The idea of someone holding onto a crush for that long is simply unrealistic, especially one from a twelve-year-old. You built the foundation for Naruto and Sakura's relationship beautifully, and for that I applaud you. Hope to see the next chapter up soon ^_^

-SNJ
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved it and hope that you update soon.
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great chapter, even though it may have taken a while, it was well worth the wait. I lol'd hard at Kiba's last thoughts at the end there. BTW, when you mentioned you have other story ideas, what pairings did you have in mind for those? Anyway, cant wait for next chapter of this and of your other story "1000 Words".

Hope you update one of those 2 soon :D