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Hey great story I love the plot and all the dips and twists that you threw in... How would all of them look at the age of 17-20 or however old they are in you r story... I hope you update soon

Absolutely perfect. You have several different love stories going on all at once. I am a hopless romantic and I love the way that you've written the characters. Keep up the wonderful work. Update soon.
Rox

dude awsome lemon. very sexy. also good turnig of point in the relationship with neji and tenten. very smart working on somany couples at the same time. but as of now, you have not mentioned either choji, shino, jiraya, or kohahamaru and friends, or i forgot about it. please try to include them or put a reminder of their actions as of now. thanks

great chapter, i can twait to see what happens! update soon JaaNee

Wonderful!!! Don't think too much and just let it flow! You are doing a great job!! I for one can't wait for the next chapter. I am so enjoying this fic!!! BRAVO!!!!

YAY!!!!!! another update. i love this fic and check everyday to see if its updated. Not that i expect it to updated daily. Thats just crazy! anyways i look forward to the next chapter. I'm curious to see what Sasuke is going to do.
Corbie

Oh My God...you so rock for this chapter! Finally! Naruto and Sakura get down in dirty! Too bad Neji is action like a poser! Hopefully he'll get his act together before TenTen really decides she can really do better.

Another great chapter! The lemon scene was so absolutely sweet and perfect, I loved it. I was so hoping that Sakura wouldn't hit him when he asked that question because when 'page downed' the story, it stopped right before her reply, lol. I can't believe Neji though. He better do some BIG time groveling and be willing to be Tenten's bitch until he gets back into her good graces, if that even happens. The only thing that I found, that stood out as far as needing correcting is Naruto's last name is spelled Uzamaki instead of Uzumaki.

Wonderful job!

Ezzy

Loved the chapter. Nice setting you created where Naruto and Sakura made love to each other. Love the tension you created with Neji and Tenten. A previous reviewer stated you spelled Naruto's last name wrong. I believe you are spelling it correctly as Uzumaki there is no such word as Uzamaki. Uzumaki does mean whirlpool in Japanese. Anyways, been checking daily for updates. I'm still addicted LOL! Hope to see more lemons and the next chapter soon! Thanks for the story!

K4L

A very nice tasteful lemon. You could feel the love in the act though with Naruto and Sakura, and I liked that. I'm glad those two crazy kids are finally together, you certainly piled on some angst there lol. Hopefully Ten Ten and Neji can make up, nice side story there. I've really enjoyed this fic, you'd done a very good job capturing the characters.