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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this first chapter has me crying. It is so full of loneliness and sorrow for things lost and unsaid. Damn you are good.
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am not sure how many times I can tell you how great a writer you are. So far this story is absolutely awesome. I love the "Kankuro must die" I laughed my butt off. I cried after Sakura ran off and Naruto went after her. The emotions and the imagery you use spark my imagination. I wish I was a good artist and could draw more than stick figures. This story has sparked my minds eye to draw, but alas, I suck at drawing people and anything more than stick figures. Thank you.
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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Love the play on words with Neji coming out of the closet. Love the Naruto x Sakura moments and also the fact that you kinda thwart Sasuke's plans before he even thinks of them. So the lemon is comming next huh? I just hope you don't tease us and have the lemon between Neji and Tenten instead of Naruto and Sakura lol! Anyways, great story and enjoying it immensely. Hope to see the next chapter soon.
K4L
K4L
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is incredibly well written, the story's dialogue and narration flows like nothing else. Naruto's forgiveness is not rushed, but a gradual process that is realistic (given how he was treated). Stalker Sasuke does creep me out, however, I hope someone does something about him soon =D. Brilliant piece of writing, I'll be waiting eagerly for an update!
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My freaking God. This is the most amazing story i have ever read, and that includes my own. Kudos to you.
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome...simply awesome!!! Can't wait to read about the "lemony" parts with Naruto and Sakura! You know I always did think Sasuke was an ass...he really is! Great job!!
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this! I can't wait to see Sasuke get knocked onto his ass. He really hasn't snapped to the fact who Naruto's father is, has he? Ohhhh..that's seriously going to blow up in his face. Great job!!!
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes the 4th is naruto's dad! u r right! if u read the manga we finally find out when Tsunade and Jiryah talk about it, we also find out some info on his mom too! so for any of u who didn't know this...SURPRISE...sorry didn't mean to spoil it but its gonna be a long time until its revealed in the show...
By the way, I absolutely LOOOVE this story! So glad that u updated so soon! big smile!
EF
By the way, I absolutely LOOOVE this story! So glad that u updated so soon! big smile!
EF
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Neji, he's so clueless. :P
Yay for Naruto!! and for Sakura!!
I'm curous as to what Sasuke is going to do.
Yay for Naruto!! and for Sakura!!
I'm curous as to what Sasuke is going to do.
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, like i said, im reviewing this too from now on. And i have to say, awesome chapter, i loved it, i started cracking up laughing so many times during that fic, especially at the end when i realised Naruto put Neji in a closet to sleep. Anyway, cant wait for next chapter.
Hope you update soon :D
Hope you update soon :D