rate_review Reviews

good story

Loved this story from beginning to end! Thought at times that Naruto would prove a bit stronger with kage bunshins as tools to better his spartan and shinobi skills, perfecting both single and group combat. Didn't drastically change the story just my wish. Love the mates chosen. Perfect setup for the sequel you mentioned at end of story!! Please let me know where to find it!

Thanks

DB

*shakes and crys* You completely forgot about Haku! And where was the developing relationship with Gaara?!! *sobs*

I hate or dislike fics where people make Anko out to be a whore she's not and heres my reasoning for it. I don't think she'd have any old lovers. She is an emotionally fragile person and has serious trust issues and hates to be vulnerable which is why I believe she's so flirtatious she likes to be in control and lead poor fools on thinking they have a chance with her only to smash those hopes to bits. With the betrayal of Orochimaru she would hate being emotionally vulnerable and sex even if she picked some random guy up would make her somewhat emotionally vulnerable and require her to trust her lover which wont happen and she would never accept that, then you have the fact that she knows she's gorgeous so she'd have extremely high standards which no guy I can think of could match, except Naruto since he knows a similar pain what with the villages scorn. That leads to yet another reason her sleeping around is HIGHLY unlikely, she knows most people think lowly about her and most men would try to get into her panties because she's hot and sexy only to dump her once they got the 'prize' she's smart, sly, and devious and would be able to tell their intentions, which is why I don't think she'd be with any guys. Those are my reasons based on logic why Anko should and would be a virgin. Or at least very inexperienced, but you make her out to be a whore and have fucked dozens of guys just cause they want to and are willing to submit at least temporarily to her.

over all, great job, from the begining to the end all the way.

Can't wait to read the next one

I think you should of done the 3-way with Anko and Tsunade. That would of been a great way to go out with a bang... Literally LOL. But I must say even though you changed the story a bit. I loved they way you made it that the warriors who was feared by all was in Naaruto the whole time.. I would like to see you keep on writing.. Happy Thanksgiving and be glad to hear from you soon... Your spelling was a bit off but I understood it all

Pretty good ending. I'll check out the sequel, at the very least, but I don't intend to write your challenge; haven't yet seen the movie and I doubt I'd do any good at it.

That was a great story. I can't wait for the next one.

Good chapter but you spelled Kimimaro wrong.

I jsut started reading the final chapter and I just wanted to stop and give you props for Denny Crain(Boston Legal).