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for Seijin no hi

by gokusgirl

person mel
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was a great story. Kakashi/Sakura is my favorite pairing and you did a good job with the dialogue, the plot and the actions of the characters. Good job.
person Anon
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome! Okay, I am a sucker for Kakashi and Sakura! Hell for Kakashi and anyone!! He is sooooo hot!!! Awesome fic. Do you take requests/challenges?
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn Sasuke. Cute story but I'm worried there won't be an update! Please keep it up!
person sris
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so sweet and cute story. I love the way you portrait both Kakashi and Sakura and the atmosphere is just perfect. One little thing I have to point out is that Sakura would (probably) never use the honorific 'kun' when addressing Kakashi. 'Kun' is used by persons of senior status in addressing those of junior status and by males of roughly the same age and status when addressing each other. 'San' would be the proper honorific in this case. Anyway I enjoyed your fic greatly and I hope you'll update soon ^__^
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it's cute so far I like long chapaters but these short chapater leave you wanting more. can't wait for the next chap.
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHH!!! How cute! Please update soon!
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thats sooo cuuuutttee lol well keep it up and update soon please

Arry
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
'Tis quite cute!! Try putting in some sort of challenge to really bring out what they mean to each other.